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Theese are some stories I made up that i felt like typing up for people to see. ^^
The King of the Dead and the King of Egypt
How?

Even in the shade the sun still beat down on the poor, old, starving slaves of the King of Egypt. What people didn't know is that he was the King of the Dead. The immortals feared him as well as mortals did. He had the strength of 200 men, the beautieness as a male with a burnt face,yet, people feared him...


The story begins!

"Send the profit..." said the King one day, as he was very unpleased from him.The guards of the King summened the profit, a young boy around the age of 13 to the king. "Yes master?" the boy mummbled , though he had never liked the King. "Why do you not like yor King. The ruler of Egypt!" the king said. The boy did not say anything. "I demand you tell me this istance!!!!!!Or you will be sent to the dungont to die!!!" the king demanded fearcly. Of course the boy said nothing. "Take him to the dungons." the said as if he was satisfied with doing this. The guards of the King took the boy and threw him in the dungon which he would sit for 4 thousand years.
Of course doing this the boy had the hatred of the King build more and more each day... but, sadly, the boy died on his 23 day there because he had died of starvation. He joined the immortals which then he found out the King of Egypt also
ruled. He was not afraid of the King now beacause of his hatred toward him... the cruleness...Yet someday he would become King of the Immortal World... But, let me tell you the whole story in the immortal world.... The King all of the sudden a appeared on his throne made from skulls and bones of the dead as he sat down the profit boy approached him....this time they boy was as strong as the king...but, the beatiness that the king did not have...... "I shall not call you king anymore you deserve less respect after what you had done to me..." the profit boy said."I do not care what you think, i practicly rule the world now, i don't care about what you think you dirty little boy...." the king replied. "Let's have a duel or a fight to the death... Loser will become the winners slave for a whole eternity...Winner get's to be the Pharo of Egypt and The King of the Dead....." the boy said. "Deal..." the king muttered.....
"Ready for the 10th round! Go!" Yelled the fight attendent ; the Grim Reaper. As he waved a black flag. It was a fight untill someone double died, which of course ment he'd just be sent back to the dead, dark world. The fight was incredible. The profit boy had blood on his nose, lips, and practicly everywhere else on his face, as well
as the broken bone in his rib cage. The Double King had Blood everywhere on his face and had a broken bone in one of his fingers. Then all of a sudden thge profit struck a blow with his hand in a fist right on the kings weakspot, his chin, he killed him;. He was now the King of Egypt and The king of the dead!

To be Continued!





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  • [04/19/06 01:26am]

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    Kikie_Noonoo
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    commentCommented on: Sun Apr 30, 2006 @ 02:35am
    anyone like the story?


    commentCommented on: Sun Apr 30, 2006 @ 03:38am
    wow so good will u finish it



    Drust The Druid
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    Apocryph
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    commentCommented on: Fri May 05, 2006 @ 10:42pm
    I hope you do finish it, it's pretty good.


    commentCommented on: Sun May 07, 2006 @ 01:50pm
    yeah, i'm gonna finish it, later, i'm trying to think of different ways to write the next part of the story.. sweatdrop



    Kikie_Noonoo
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    ken but my real name THOR
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    commentCommented on: Fri Jun 23, 2006 @ 04:18am
    man this story was good i liked it


    commentCommented on: Fri Jun 23, 2006 @ 10:50pm
    this is so good that my eyes are burning! burning_eyes



    Kikie_Noonoo
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    tubasleeve
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    commentCommented on: Thu Oct 26, 2006 @ 09:38pm
    ...this is very long


    commentCommented on: Tue Oct 31, 2006 @ 10:02pm
    it is pretty long but good...



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