Actually, I really liked this! LOL! This is really creative. I like the "darkness" in it. It makes it seem more human. Of course, you're hearing this from someone who writes stories where someone almost always dies, and it's almost always Ed *snicker* but honestly, I really enjoyed it. I'd like to read more of these.
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The Music Spirit · Community Member · Fri Jun 16, 2006 @ 05:16pm