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My Poetry. The new stuff at least.
Here is my newest poetry. Hope you like it.
nothing special just a poem
Will you please listen?
I need you to listen to me.
Why the ******** wont you listen!!!
You only care about him!

Will you listen now?
I have a knife to your throat
The pressure is increasing
Blood is starting to flow

OK so now that your listening
I love you and that won't ever change
As I take the knife off your throat
Whats your answer?

Talk to me! Please...
What is your answer to me?
Damn you answer me!
Wait what? yes? ummm...

Surprized, shocked, Happy
For the first time in ages
Thank you for listening to me
I love you sweetheart.

Comment Please






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StrikeOfLife
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 04, 2006 @ 03:27am
wow... speechless... yay write more!!! that's so cool!!


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 22, 2006 @ 06:53pm
Wow!!! I heart your poetry!!! All of it! You need to write so much more! My poetry is good, but not nearly as good as yours!!!!!

heart Nicole



kookygurl
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Finny8theNinny
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 04, 2006 @ 08:24pm
i love your poetry its really cool whee


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