these are a few poems I wrote a lil while ago please tell me what you think of them:
#1
See Through Fears
Blood red curtains,
Hung over crystal mirrors,
To cover up,
All those see through fears.
Lovely flowers,
And painted towers,
Shielding your eyes,
From my see through fears.
Pleasant lullabies,
Sung from up high,
To drown out the cries,
Of my see through fears.
Watchful eyes,
Followed by sighs,
Spot me in my,
See through fears.
Long smooth hands,
Take hold of my bands,
Soft long hands pull me from,
My see through fears.
#2
Cutter:
Running water,
In blood soaked rain,
Feelings run hotter,
With shots of pain.
Seeing the scars run deep and red,
Watching the crimson run down the bed
Hearing the pain and sorrow in my head,
Hoping that soon I would be dead.
The room becomes blurred,
With sounds I once heard,
The world becomes black,
As my life force runs free.
Cool hands on my cheeks,
Wet lips on my head,
Telling me the truth,
That I am not dead.
The pain still burns,
And my body still yearns,
Yearns for the pain,
Yearns for the death,
My eyes are unfocused,
My mind is a haze,
The only thought I have is,
That I'll continue this the upcoming days.
#3
" The sickening dance"
"I shiver as I see you begin to advance,
I'm unable to move,
so I just prepare for the upcoming dance.
I shiver again as I feel fingers,
entwining in my hair , twisting and kneading
My eyes start to water, and chest to heave
as you begin to pull me closer.
You push me down and kiss me roughly,
I scream as I feel you push, and pull in me.
I feel like your pulling me apart,
like your reaching in and ripping my insides
the pain subsides as you begin to shudder.
I feel you pull out as I begin to cry,
I can feel your hands on my skin,
as you leave with out looking back.
And then when my sobbing became harder,
I hear you whisper, as you walk away,
" thanks for the dance".
And then the darkness envelopes me."
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