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Here is Sariema's Poetry Corner, continued!!! Now let's get on with the poetry! By the way my thoughts on the poems are in (()).

((Here is an early one I did, it's like a song and poem combined. I did it durning certain events in my life...so uh enjoy?))

Who Are You?

I'm confused by the things you say,
by the things you do.
I'm confused by everything around me,
and ask "who?"

I didn't wish to ask,
but now I have to.
Who Is behind that mask,
who are you?

Are you a christian,
or are you not?
Do you love God,
or have you forgot?

It's really not alout,
I just want to know,
"Who are you?"
then I'll go.

((So you don't think everything I write is all happy-go-lucky, here is a poem I wrote when in the opposate mood.))

The Tears that Come.

I wish for tears
that do not come
while alone
in my room.

They come in crowds
when I wish them not,
those I con not stop
not a drop.

Why not now,
when I want them?
Why not now when I need them?
((seems a little un finished, well maby i alter it later, your thoughts apriciated here))

((Here is one about a photograph I took. It's kinda..different but mayby you all will like it.))

Peaceful Photo.

There sits a photographed watermill,
sitting alone upon a great hill.
Rapidly a river pours on through,
a powerful curent like the wind that blew.

A quite peaceful scene,
the picture depicts,
as the water drifts, splashes,
along side the aged wheel.

All is still after the "click"
A photo of a mill,
placed gently on a shelf,
forever now the scene is still.
((I altered the ending a bit, but trust me its better then before.))

((Here is one simply about well writing poetry.))

Written Rhymes.

Poems Flow From the pencil at hand,
come out ad word of the land.
Describing life, emotions, expressions
with no limit to their thought.

Some are sobern,others joyous
many angry or flamboyent.
Starts at the heart, moves to the mind,
down to the hand holding the pencil of thine.

((again more poems to come but that seems to be enough of mine for now. Please comment, it'll make me smile.))