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poems please comment and tlell me wat you think ^^
Candles Light

we sit together
starring at each other the candles burning in our eyes
the smiles growing bigger and bigger during each passing moment
as the candles burn down our loves grows bigger and stronger
your beautiful eyes shine in the light
the candles go out
and the darkness ingulfs us both until there si no light anywhere
the only things i can see is your beautiful close face
and your graceful lips
coming closer and closer




POEMS

can you grasp my hand in your own?
can you pull me toward you nothing to stop us?
can you hold me tight and never let go?
can you kiss me like theres no tomorow?
can you lift me off my feet and carry me away?
can you lay me down softly with no delay?
can you put your hands on my wrists and hold me?



sprite of my love

your my sun that britens up my day
your the moon and the stars at night
shinning hi in the sky
never alone yours always around me
watching from above
your the clouds when im depressed
the rain when im sad
your the beat in my heart keeping me alive
your are my life
you are my one true love


biggrin comment pleaze exactly what you think ^^






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The Dreamer in Solitude
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 29, 2006 @ 11:34pm
eek eek whoa eek eek


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 01:55am
can you grasp my hand in your own? yes
can you pull me toward you nothing to stop us?totaly
can you hold me tight and never let go? ill aways hold you
can you kiss me like theres no tomorow? yeah yeah yeah i could sexy
can you lift me off my feet and carry me away? if you want me too
can you lay me down softly with no delay? i dont know it depends if your protected or not
can you put your hands on my wrists and hold me? yes sweety i could



mr.gravekeeper
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zorosgurl
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 02:02am
LMAO those are weird comments lol


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 03:09am
well i thought thats what u ment



mr.gravekeeper
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mr.gravekeeper
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 04:15am
soooooooooooo whats up heart heart


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 05:55am
LMAO its ok lol



zorosgurl
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mr.gravekeeper
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 07:06pm
are you sure its ok sweety? heart heart ninja


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 07:25pm
just kinda creepy LMAO



zorosgurl
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mr.gravekeeper
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 07:30pm
poems are ment to be answerd arnt they?


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 08:47pm
i think gravekeeper13 loves you rofl



gravekeeper1
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mr.gravekeeper
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 08:49pm
redface redface well i do but hey shut up you wanna be gravekeeper


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 02, 2006 @ 11:01pm
dun dun dunnnnnnnn



ur1guy
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mr.gravekeeper
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 02, 2006 @ 11:05pm
i think some one better not say dun dun dunnn again hmmmm


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 05, 2006 @ 12:17am
dun dun dunnnnnnnnnn



The Dreamer in Solitude
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zorosgurl
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commentCommented on: Mon Sep 18, 2006 @ 07:10pm
hehe im gonna put more on if i feel like typing them LMFAO


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