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Naruto Fan Fic ~Part 2~
Okay back to the Fan Fic people!!!! (Quick thing: if something is in ~ <- that thing then it means that someone is thinking it. it will come up l8r )We left off where Kaoru had just met Sasuke and Naruto. Sasuke and Naruto started fighting (like usual) and Sasuke made Naruto fall onto the ground and Kaoru just helped him up. Okay? You got it? Cool.
START THE FAN FIC!!!


~START~


"You two are pretty cool! Believe It!" Naruto said. I smiled and let go of his hand from just helping him up. Sasuke smirked and started talking to Takeya.
"Do you guys have anywhere to stay yet?" Sasuke asked Takeya.
"Not yet, but Kakashi said he'll have us places to stay by tonight." Takeya replied. "Kakashi seems like a nice mentor."
"He is!" Sakura said smiling. "He's our mentor right now."
"COOL!" I said jumping up and down. "Uh oh! I'm getting hyper!" I giggled and looked at Takeya, who had seen me like this many times before. He smiled and turned to talk to Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto.
"When she gets hyper she starts spin...whoa!" I grabbed Takeya's arm and pulled him away from Sasuke, Naruto and Sakura. We swung each-other around in circles. Then we let go and we went flying.
"OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Me next!" Naruto yelled. I grabbed his hands and we spun around for a couple of minutes while Takeya grabbed Sakura and started spinning too. Me and Naruto unclasped our hands and went flying again. I ran over and grabbed Sasuke's hands and spun him around in circles. By now my face was red from running in circles, and I had a plan to make Sasuke red too. He seemed like the kinda guy who doesn't have many friends, so I decided to change that.
"Sasuke, you're blushing!!!!" I said teasingly. He wasn't really but after I said that he did blush. We were still spinning.
" I am not." Sasuke said trying to shoot down my comment which just hit him. I laughed.
"You are too!" I laughed and let go of his hands. We went flying. After my butt hit the ground, I started laughing my head off. Takeya started laughing and so did Naruto and Sakura. Sasuke was still blushing, but he was staring at his hands like it was the first time he had ever held hands with a girl. Wait....
"Sasuke...*giggle*...what're you...*giggle*...doing?" I said trying to be serious. But I kept on laughing so I wasn't coming off too serious.
"N-nothing." He went back to leaning on a tree and sulking.
"Why were you...*laugh*...staring at your hands?" I said, "What was it, like the first time you ever held...*laugh*...hands with a girl?"
"N-no...." his voice carried off and he blushed more.
"Ha-ha! Now you are blushing!!!" I said. "See Takeya? Sasuke's blushing!" Takeya turned around and smiled at Sasuke trying to tell him the teasing from me would end soon.
"Kaoru..." Takeya looked at me like he was mad, "Chill, god."
I pretended to obey. "Sorry, sir." Then I started laughing again.

~SASUKE'S POV (Point Of View)~
~she just held hands with me! she is kinda cool...we're friends now right?~

~KAORU'S POV AGAIN~

I started to cool down. I sat up and crossed my legs. My head kinda hurt from having it lean on that tree from laughing. I patted the ground next to me and had everyone come sit in a circle. Naruto sat on my one side and Sasuke sat on my other side.
"I remember this one game we used to play with our teachers when we were little in the Sand Village, let's play it. We all go around saying something about us. I'll start." I pretended to think then, "My name is Kaoru, and my favorite color is green!" I smiled then looked at Naruto. "Naruto your turn."
"Uh..." he sat for a couple of seconds thinking, "My name is Naruto and I WILL BE THE NEXT HOKAGE!!!! BELIEVE IT!!!" He smiled and looked at Takeya, who was sitting on Naruto's other side.
"My name is Takeya and...hmmm...and my little sister Kaoru is my best friend." He smiled at me. Then he turned to Sakura who was sitting on Takeya's other side. "Sakura?"
"My name is Sakura and I think Kaoru is my long lost sister or something!" She reached over and huggled me. I huggled back. She sat back down then looked at Sasuke.
"My name is Sasuke and...uhhhh...I just got 2 new friends today." he half-smiled at me and Takeya. He looked at me, and I took my turn.
Me: "Uh...I just got 3 new friends today!!!"
Naruto: "My middle name is Lawrence!" pause. I asked, "Really?" "Nope!"
Takeya: "I don't have a last name!"
Sakura: "I like Sasuke!"
Sasuke: "I'm gonna kill my brother."
Me: "Ninja shoes make my feet hurt!"
Naruto: "I think...NEVER MIND!!!" he started blushing.
Takeya: "MY HAIR IS GREEN!!!!" "WE CAN SEE THAT TAKEYA!!!" we yelled back.
Sakura: "Kakashi-Sensei!"

We turned around and did see Kakashi. "I figured you guys would be here. I listened to your whole game." He smiled and looked at Naruto. "What were you going to say Naruto, during the game?"
"Uh...nothing..." Naruto's face turned red again.
Kakashi turned to me and Takeya, "We've found both of you guys houses to stay in. It's really funny because Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto all have one room free at their house. So me and the others decided that Takeya and Kaoru get to decide where to stay." He smiled at me and Takeya.
"OOOOOOOO! Yay!" I smiled and turned around to look at Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto. Just as I was going to say who I wanted to stay with, Takeya butted in.
"I'll stay at Naruto's if that's cool." he said looking from Naruto to Kakashi. Naruto said that was totally cool with him and Kakashi said it was fine. Kakashi handed Takeya a key to Naruto's house.
"Well that narrows it down..." I said. I was gonna stay at Naruto's house but since Takeya took it, I am having second thoughts. If I could've gone first I probably wouldv'e said Naruto, but now i'll say, "Sakura? Is it okay if I stay with you?"
"Yeah!" she said cheerfully. Kakashi handed me a key to Sakura's house.
"Tommorrow you all have training at school okay? There we will say what team you two," Kakashi pointed to me and Takeya. " will be in. Go home and eat some dinner." My stomach growled and so did Takeya's as soon as Kakashi said dinner. Kakashi walked off through the forest. Sakura was smiling from ear to ear. I went over to a tree where my backpack had flown off after spinning around in circles. It was green and had my clothes and my locket in it. As soon as I bent down to pick it up, I had a weird dizzy spell and fainted.
"Kaoru!" I heard everyone yell. I had fainted, yet I could hear everything they were saying.
"Damn. It's my fault. We ran out of food yesterday on our way here. She must've run out of energy." He picked up my bag that was still leaning against the tree. Naruto ran forward and picked me up.
"I'll carry her to Sakura's. Wow, she's really light." Naruto said. Sasuke walked forward.
"I'll carry her, doofus. You are too much of a klutz. You'd probably give her a concussion from running her head into trees." Sasuke reached over and grabbed me from Naruto.
Naruto got mad and yelled at Sasuke. "OH YEAH MISTER I-KNOW-EVERYTHING!!!!!" Naruto was yelling too loud. It was giving me a headache. I wrinkled up my forehead and sighed.
"Nice going, klutz. You just gave someone else a headache, besides me for once." Sasuke said to Naruto. "You can apologize tommorrow." I heard footsteps and Sasuke followed Takeya, who was following Sakura, out of the trees. Naruto walked behind Sasuke & me. He walked with his head down. Sasuke followed Takeya, and was looking at me the whole time. When we got out of the trees Sasuke still looked at me the whole way to Sakura's. When we got to Sakura's she opened the door and had everyone go inside.
"Where's her room?" Takeya, Sasuke and Naruto asked all at the same time. Sakura looked up from her first aid kit she had just gotten out from under her counter in her kitchen. She shut the First Aid Kit and said, "Follow me, its up here."
She lead us up the stairs and took all of us into a bedroom across from a bathroom. The walls were white, and so was everything in the room. Sasuke put me down gently on the bed. Everyone surrounded the bed and stared at me. Sakura was opening the First Aid Kit again on the end of the bed.
"Okay guys. Since no one saw her fall and all we saw was her laying on the ground, gently squeeze different parts of her body to see if she broke any thing. She'll flinch so we know what's, if anything's, broken." Sakura gently pushed on my upper arms to demonstrate to the boys. I felt big hands start to touch my ankles, which I knew was my brother. Slightly smaller clammy hands started touching my right arm. When he got to my lower arm, sort of by my wrist, a shot of pain went down my arm.
"Okay, Takeya touch her leg again." Sakura instructed. He did. "Okay, Naruto touch her arm again." ~Oh god, please no...~ Naruto touched my arm and an even worse shot of pain went down my arm. "Okay she hurt her arm." Sakura dug around in her First Aid Kit. I felt Naruto (Mr. Clammy Hands) wrap a bandage around my arm. When it was fully wrapped Sakura said, "Okay everyone, tell her goodnight then you guys get."
Takeya walked over and kissed my forehead. "G'Night sis. Love ya." He walked out of the room and stood outside the door waiting for Naruto and Sasuke to finish.
Sasuke and Naruto stood there for 5 minutes waiting for the other to say good night. Finally Sasuke yawned and touched my unhurt arm and said, "Night Kaoru."
Naruto waited until Sasuke left the room. He went down on his knees next to the bed and touched my unhurt arm too. " Kaoru, you're the only one who doesn't think I'm a total freak, and I hope I didn't hurt you at all today. Good Night." He left awkwardly and shut my door behind him.



~END OF DAY ONE OF FAN FIC~

hope it's good so far!
luv: Revvy/ Kaoru






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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 10:42pm
YAY! First comment! whee Yay! It was very good!! And detailed! Detailed is good! Do is random! heart heart heart
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