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Day 2 Part 2 of Naruto Fan-Fic
Okay, I will finish Day 2 in the Fan-Fic, before I fall asleep tonight. BTW: if you want your naruto character (good or evil) in the fan-fic, I can't promise you a big part but I can promise you a part. (it may be small.) All of the Big roles are taken, (I think...) but I might make more openings...lol BEGIN THE FAN- FIC ALREADY!!!!



~BEGINNING PART 2~

Sakura sat down next to me on one side and Takeya sat in the other. Naruto sat directly behind me, one row up. I turned around in my chair so I could see everyone, except Sasuke, who sat on the other side of the room.
"Why is Sasuke sitting all by himself?" I asked Sakura.
"He likes being alone, and plus, he always sits there." Sakura rolled her eyes and pointed toward the door, where a group of three people came in.
One was a girl with white-blonde hair that was pulled into a ponytail, one was a kid who seemed a little on the chubby side (Kaoru: Revvy-chan shouldn't be talking), and the other seemed very calm and seemed to pout a lot.
"Ino! Come here and meet my new friends!!!" Naruto yelled across the room. Ino sighed and shook her head at Naruto but came over anyway.
"Ino, this is my friend Kaoru," Naruto explained, "And this is her twin brother Takeya. They just got here yesterday from the Sand Village."
Ino was the girl with the white-blonde hair. "Hey Ino!" I smiled and held out my hand for her to shake it. She seemed like she was in a trance. I tried to figure out what she was looking at, and found out she was staring at Takeya. "Ino?" She jerked awake just as she almost started drooling. (Who would drool over my brother??? Ick.)
"Sorry about that. I'm Ino Yamanaka. My two teammates are Choji Akimichi and Shikamaru Nara." She held out her hand and I shook it. Ino seemed nice enough. But just then Sakura tugged on my vest and pointed at the door, where three more people walked in. I hadn't figured out which one was Choji and which was Shikamaru, but I figured that I would find out later.
One of the people who had just walked in had white eyes and blueish hair, one had a dog tucked down the front of his shirt (weird), and another had on sunglasses...we're inside though...weird.
"Hinata! Come here for a sec! I want you to meet my new friends!!!" Naruto yelled across the room to Hinata who rushed right over. Hinata was the girl with white eyes and blue hair. ~How does Naruto know this many girls?~
"Hinata," Naruto said, "These are my new friends, Takeya and Kaoru. They just got here from the Sand Village." Hinata seemed really shy.
"Hi Hinata! I'm Kaoru." I stuck out my hand for her to shake. She smiled and shook my hand.
"Then he," she pointed to Takeya, "must be Takeya."
"Yup! We're twins!" I said proudly.
She smiled and said, "Kiba and Shino are on my t-team. Kiba is the one with the dog, A-akamaru. Shino is the one with sunglasses on inside. W-weird, I know." She smiled and sat down next to Naruto.
"Kaoru! Another team! Oh God, It's Lee." Sakura said. I didn't know which one was Lee but one of them seriously needed to pluck his eyebrows, and one had white eyes like Hinata, and the other one was a girl with her hair up in two buns.
"Kaoru, that's the last team of Leaf Ninja. The one in green with the funky eyebrows is Rock Lee. The one with the eyes like Hinata's is Neji. And the girl is Tenten." Sakura explained this slowly so I could remember. Kakashi walked into the classroom and told everyone to sit down and face him at the front of the room. I turned around in my chair.
"Okay guys. We have 2 new ninja among us. Takeya and Kaoru stand up." Takeya and I stood up and Kakashi beckoned us to the front of the classroom. "Okay everyone. This here is Takeya." Takeya mumbled a "Hey." "And this is Kaoru." I waved to everyone and said "Hi!" "All of us leaders have decided which groups they will be in. As soon as another Sand Villager comes here we will have those three be in a group but for now...Takeya, you are in Team 10 with Ino, Shikamaru, and Choji."
Ino stood up and said "YES!!!" then she sat back down.
"Kaoru you're in my group with Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura." Kakashi said proudly.
"YEAH!!!" I yelled. "Thank you so much Kakashi-sensei!"
"Everyone go to your leader to train for the day." When I wasn't looking all of the leaders had walked in. Takeya waved goodbye and walked off to join his new group. I waved back sadly, but I was still happy that I got to be in Naruto's group with Sasuke and Sakura.
I stood next to Kakashi-sensei as everyone walked over. Kakashi already had something in mind for today. "Since we have 4 people for now, split up into 2 groups and you can train with a partner. Now who's with who?"
"ME and KAORU!!!" Naruto yelled.
"Well it's settled then! Naruto and Kaoru will be in a group and Sakura and Sasuke will be in the other. Okay?" Kakashi said to all of us.
"Yeah." Sasuke said as he headed toward the door. Sakura chased after him.
I looked at Naruto. I knew nothing about where to train so I figured he would take us somewhere. "Let's go to the clearing. I have to work on target practice. Do you need help with that too?" Naruto said calmly to me.
"Uh...yeah I guess I could use work on that..." My voice trailed off as Naruto led me out of the building and to the edge of the woods. My eyes turned purple and I grabbed Naruto's hand.
"Huh?! Uh, Kaoru are you okay?" Naruto said nervously.
"Uh, not really, I have bad memories about forests. I always freak out and start acting weird until I know I'm safe." I said quickly as I started shivering.
"Uh, okay..." Naruto squeezed my hand, "It'll be fine! You're with me and nothing bad will happen, BELIEVE IT!" He led me through the forest, I still was shivering and my eyes were still purple, but Naruto looked totally fine. ~ He didn't have something like what happened to me and Takeya happen to him.~

We showed up in the clearing and we started laying out targets. They were small circles with a bullseye on it. The red rings were sorta faded, so they musta been old or Naruto had used them before. Once we were done setting up the targets, Naruto took Kunai knives out of his pockets. He tossed a few to me. I caught them and placed them between my fingers.
"Naruto? Do you wanna go first, or should I?" I asked politely. He considered it for a minute or two.
"How 'bout you go first, so then I can help you with the things you aren't good at?" He said still thinking.
"Okay!" I said happily. Naruto walked off and stood behind one of the trees that I was aiming at.
"Okay, Try to hit the bullseye on all of the targets." He said while peeking out from behind the tree.
"Okay!" I tried to focus on the target we hung from the tree above me. I threw the kunai knife as hard as I could at the target. It hit the red ring going around the bullseye. I threw another kunai knife at a target to my left, by the tree that Naruto was watching me from. It hit the white between the bullseye and the red ring. I threw knife after knife until I had hit all of the targets, even if they weren't all bullseyes.
Naruto stepped out from behind the tree. "Okay, here's your problem. Pretend to throw a kunai knife." I did the exact motions I take to throw a kunai knife. "You aren't throwing it the right way. You hold it perfectly and everything else but you don't use the right throwing technique." He walked into the clearing, grabbed one of the kunai knives off of a target and stood next to me. "Flick your wrist instead of rolling it. Like this." He aimed at the now empty target and threw the kunai knife. It hit the bullseye. "Okay? Here watch." His chest pressed against my back and he took my hand and handed me a kunai knife. I threw the knife at the same target he did, and it hit the bullseye. Naruto's hand was still over mine and we did that technique two more times until I got it correct.
I was exhausted. We took a lunch break and got ramen back in town. Naruto and I slurped our ramen and drank two glasses of water. When we finished eating we went back through the woods (I freaked out again), and we started practicing climbing trees.

The sun was starting to set and Naruto and I were breathing heavily. Naruto sat down cross-legged on the grass and took a break. I turned to face the tree again, pushing myself to make it all the way to the top. Concentrating my chakra at my feet, I took off at the tree. I made it past my highest mark and made it almost to the top when I felt dizzy and I felt a falling sensation. On the way down I hit a tree limb, knocking the wind outta me.
"Kaoru!" I heard Naruto yell. I knew the ground was coming soon, and I clenched my teeth with the little strength I had left, bracing for the impact.

But the impact never came. Naruto caught me and we went rolling across the ground. I landed flat on my back, and Naruto was laying on top of me. He pushed himself off of me and was now in push-up position over me. I opened my eyes slowly and felt them change colors. They went from blue to red, red for pain. My back and my chest had excrutiating (sp?) pain shooting all over inside of them. Naruto looked at me and started inching his face closer to mine. ~Whoa is he trying to kiss me?~ I tried to move but my chest and back hurt too much. ~Crud, I can't move.~
"Naruto?" I asked him painfully. He shook his head and looked around. I wanted to curl up in a little ball and just hide, but I knew that was impossible because of my chest. Tears started to fall down my cheeks as the pain grew worse.
"Kaoru? Kaoru are you okay?!?!" Naruto said worriedly (sp?).
I couldn't answer. It now hurt to talk and it hurt to breathe. Naruto picked me up, bride & groom style, and ran me through the woods back into town. It was almost dark out and the shop lights were turning on. Tears were still flowing down my face and I was getting Naruto's shirt wet. I suddenly felt bad, I was going to make everyone worry again. Naruto's probably worried that he did something wrong.

Naruto took me to Kakashi's house and knocked on the door. Kakashi opened the door and had a book in hand. "Naruto, what're you-" Kakashi noticed me and saw that I was crying. Kakashi beckoned Naruto inside who was still carrying me. Naruto layed me down on the couch and I felt pangs of pain shoot through me again. I passed out.



~END OF PART 2~

okay guys sorry for the long break between part 1 and part 2. I will write more later. Okay??? Yay! Byes! blaugh

heart -revvy-chan, kaoru-kun, kiwi-chan!

ps: my hands hurt from typing so be greatful!!! ninja ninja ninja





 
 
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