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Posted by: GilAskan Tue Jan 04, 2005 @ 12:23am

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Its a very old anime, its been made like 6-8 years ago?

I think I just threw up in my mouth.

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Commented on: Tue Jan 04, 2005 @ 12:28am


	NICE OPENING, HON. ^-^ You've got a sort of... cinematic style, it's hard to explain. Definitely different... heart I like it a lot, actually. Good job!

Commented on: Tue Jan 04, 2005 @ 12:28am


	your talent makes me a Sad and Proud Panda. Yessiree. Bio is gonna be DOOM. I think I'll die. ;o; Much love! Aoi

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Commented on: Sat Sep 17, 2005 @ 07:38pm


	Hey I like it. Good intro and voice in your writting. I wonder...

Commented on: Sun Apr 02, 2006 @ 12:29am


	very nice! you are a great writer, you don't overwhelm the story with details or are too brief, i also like the fact that you can really see the character's personality n his feelings through your writing. Keep up the good work!^^

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Commented on: Sun Feb 18, 2007 @ 07:32am


	Quite good, quite good... though as a fellow writer I think this section would be a bit of a better area to start: It still is a dream to me. I barely remember what happened, or how I awoke. I cannot remember actually being there, actually existing there. All I remember was that I could think for myself. I had the choice to run. So I ran. I swam through the giant gates. I went higher and higher. I saw the light. I burst through the cobalt water, icy with winter�s breath still clinging wherever it could. I saw for the first time beauty. I saw the rolling waves, and wispy pearl colored clouds. I was awake, for the very first time. And then from there, you could incorporate the main character's knowledge of the "Crei" and the like... but this is just a suggestion. Choose your structure as you wish. 3nodding

Commented on: Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 01:28pm


	sweetness i like dark stories

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Commented on: Tue May 29, 2007 @ 04:59am


	Brilliant dark imagery. "brilliant dark"...is that an oxymoron?

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