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Hole in my head
Take a quick peek of the contents of my mind.
poems and stuff
Sometimes I wish I was a year older,
Sometimes I wish I was a bit bolder.
Sometimes I wish I didn't take that turn,
Sometimes I wish I didn't get a sunburn.
Sometimes I wish that I had more time,
Sometimes I wish I had one more dime.
Sometimes I wish I could laughed more,
Sometimes I wish my arms weren't so sore.
Sometimes I wish that I hadn't sworn,
Sometimes I wish that I wasn't born.
but I shall always wish that I never treated you bad,
because it broke my heart to see you so sad.





you lied and I belived you
you cried and I hugged you
you left and I waited for you
you hurt me and I let you
and after all this i still can't hate you.





and as I lay on my little bed,
on my pillow lies my little head,
and I can hear them play my song,
but I can not rise to sing along.
If I do I will not wake,
for my love to fully take,
and I shall miss that wedding kiss,
that will make the day fully bliss.






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[Ka_ze]
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 08, 2006 @ 03:21am
i love the second poem i can relate


commentCommented on: Fri Sep 14, 2007 @ 01:03pm
aaaaaw love thm all mad me wanna cry lol thyr asome



EyesOfIgnis
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SozoseiGaAru
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 09:01pm
The first one has a great pattern, and the end makes it super sweet!
The second one reminds me of a story I read once, it was tragic!
The third is great, it is very vague in a sense where you can imagine what it means yourself. The possibilities!


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 28, 2008 @ 04:07am
reminds me of kyle crying crying



iCupcakeLOVE
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Yuuki is RADICAL OwO
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 29, 2008 @ 04:50am
ahh so deep~ crying
i like poems
and i suck at writing them~
this world isnt fair gonk


commentCommented on: Mon Nov 10, 2008 @ 11:13pm
ur poems are all just so amazing!! i wish i was as good as u...v mrgreen 4laugh



cccKrazy Ninja
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