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I wrote two poems for LA on the abstract word ignorance and don't know which is better.

Ignorance walks everywhere,
It invades our minds, it screams in the air.
It curses whole countries and little ones heads,
And leaves absolutly no regrets.

or

Ignorance screams in the air,
Though it has nothing to say.
It opens the door into our head,
Thoygh we are the ones to pay

I cannot decide which. :B