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read it if you want...but if you do you must be as crazy as me
this is what i think....this is what i say
Ok this is something i wrote a while back...Not sure what it is exactly.
Maybe a free verse poem....I dunno.

In my mind its not the best
Im feeling better less and less
Trapped in a tomb there 's no going back
My mind is a cage, there is no escape

Looking from the outside
Everything seems fine
But once past the face
My mind is confined
Darkness comes...
and shadows follow
But instead of fear
I feel hollow

Emotionless and empty
Alone and betrayed
I'm suppose to feel these feelings
Im feeling the're delayed

I'm trapped in between
Two immpossible things
The land in my mind
That noone believes
And the "real" one outside
That i dont want to face
I'm drowning in darkness
I just want to hide

Scars run deep
And memories deeper
They come flooding forom the darkness
Things i'd rather forget
I'm feeling i should try to face them
And yet,

Sometimes it is easier
To turn and run away
Then to stay behind
And try to face the pain
Trying to make sense of the past
When everythings to loose
And there's nothing to gain

Trapped in a cycle
It is never ending
To anyone whos listening
This message i am sending
Do the right thing
You know what it is
Dont suffer in silence
SPEAK OUT AND BE HEARD

Your welcome to leave opinions if you wish.






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PoP_rOcKs_AnD_cOcAiNe
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 03, 2006 @ 04:00am
this is really good better then what i could ever write you have some good talent there


commentCommented on: Sun May 24, 2009 @ 08:14pm
wow thats really good... I have a few ideas on how to make it rhyme more but this makes me wanna print it out and put it on the front of a binder :3 Good joB!



Frosted Cookii3
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