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I'm back by popular demand!!
I know...In the begining it hurt me too.....
heehee welcome to my journal!!! this is the first post so here is a little taste of some poetry that way you can have a taste of the goodness!!! it wont be very good but at least you keep comeing back for more!! hee hee xd !this is something i wrote when i was in sixth grade...it's kinda cheesy and a little long but i like it!! xd it's on my other account Rynka of the Darkness along with more poetry and stories!!you'll like them i know i do... i wrote them...i guess i better like it! hee hee xd here it is!!:

*-Siren in Blue-*

some say it was cold
while others dont say
but all heard her song
that sad seasoned day

no one could talk
and no one could see
all could not walk
because on one was free

this girl, she was different
they know that it's true
they tought she was strange
they swore they all knew

they said she was alone
no one there by her side
that she spoke to no one
some say she just died

yet when it is dark
and the moon glitters on the shore
the people would listen
some not knowing what for

then all of the sudden
the people would hear
a sweet hum from the beach
which enveloped the ear

the hum turned to words
then words to a song
the people sat and listened...
they listened all night long

every night this would happen
they all knew by who
it was the girl who was different
shewas the siren in blue

for she appeared only at night
in a gown of deep blue
she walked along the beach
singing nothing but truth

she sang of the past
of teh then and the now
then she'd sing in a tounge
that no other could pronounce

yet her songs sounded sad
as if she hurt deep inside
but at times she sounded joyoius
as if happy to be alive

and sometimes when they listened
they could faintly hear
a second voice join her
just as sweet to the ear

who could it be
did he live here in town
was he her dear lover
or was he just playing around

some say he was a nymph
who had fallen in love with girl
others say he too was different
that they shared the same world

everynight they would listen
to every word every hyme
but when dawn approched
they forgot the whole thing

but each night the smooth voices
would fill the ruff breeze
both singing in chouse
it was total serenity

then one night it stopped
she jsut dissapeared
the singing jsut quit
the people couldn't hear

from soft dusk to smooth dawn
the songs were not heard
the girl who was different
did not song a word

for the girl who was different
who people thought weird
who left blck and white
whos colors were smeared

was gone just like that
some say to the sea
not to be heard from again
she was let loose, set free

and the story gose on
about a girl who found a home
who found her special world
were she her self could roam

some say she ran away
while others do believe
something that gives truth
she came form the sea

thier siren was real
and her sad songs were too
yet what they believe could me myth
about the siren in blue

she left like she came
without a singel smile or shine
she left that sad town
but still lives on in thier minds


I hope youlike this!! i found my book but i need to fix the prolog...i'll have in done in a few minutes so come back and read it then!! hee hee! whee






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Cloud Liongod
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 22, 2007 @ 05:24am
Nice poetry for a six grader. it is better then what i can do right now.lol


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