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Jinx's journal
anything i feel at the moment
Poems wrote by me
this is an entry of things i think about at the time. This time it is poems:


YOU


I sat on a ledge waiting for you,
Letting the wind take me soul,
To only you,
The soul i gave to you was so full,
It was once so whole,
Now i feel,
Oh so deep inside,
That the love i once held for you,
Was never what lied within it,
You held me so tight,
And now you are so gone,
I waited so long,
Until the day,
Where is felt,
Deep within the kelt,
That the time of being whole,
Was never shown,
So now i am whole,
For being myself,
The whole inside the cold.


GLASS COLD LAKE

Over the glass cold lake,
Stands a very lively stake,
To the one who held it,
Whom never was late,
Who showed no careless mistakes,
Deep within the glass cold lake.

Over this glass cold lake,
Once stood a very deadly curse,
That once was full of love,
And no dispare,
But until the stake,
It was no scare,
Why must you be there,
Deep within this glass cold lake.

Over that glass cold lake,
Will stand nothing at all,
Just a blank memory,
Of which no one will understand at all,
They will now think,
Or at least when you say,
The glass cold lake,
Is that,
Deep within that glass cold lake,
Nothing,
Nothing stood at all.

more will come if people comment these ones....... but this is how i feel..... so i dont care what the heck you say about them wink






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Gemini6131990
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 19, 2006 @ 10:35pm
i liked ur poems they were interesting.


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 21, 2006 @ 01:42am
i like ur poems and so does my hyper active friend.lol



angel of beginning
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ricanboy21
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 24, 2006 @ 05:44pm
was up give me your aim please biggrin


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 02, 2007 @ 09:16pm
awesome peoms.



Bluesilverishwolf
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mod9999
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commentCommented on: Thu May 03, 2007 @ 08:41pm
wat up hey that wa tight i write too. you ask me to read you some some time plues ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm oh yea write some more


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 13, 2007 @ 02:10am
your poetry is amazing we have much in common will you be my friend



big_sister_mei
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stitch14
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 29, 2007 @ 08:11pm
awesome poems!


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