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Hey everyone who actually takes the time 2 read my journal LOLZ i had 2 write a poem 4 school, and everyone says that this poem is good. read it and tell me what u think plz!!!!!!!! >w< ~Winter Solstice~ Snowflakes fall slowly from the sky The full moon turns my path into silver Silence surrounds me, no bird or insect calls Then a mournful hoot breaks the soft quiet Two golden eyes peer out of the bushes They reveal themselves in front of me A fox, as white as the snow falling Smiling slyly, then darting away quickly Our bustling, busy world has changed To a silent, white and silver forest On this beautiful, silent winter solstice

Posted by: The Lights of Seoul Thu Dec 21, 2006 @ 02:14am

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Commented on: Fri Dec 22, 2006 @ 12:17am


	plz read this and tell me what u think plz!!!!! whee whee whee

Commented on: Fri Dec 22, 2006 @ 12:59am


	good kicks the crap out of mine

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Commented on: Sat Dec 23, 2006 @ 03:00am


	i had 2 read this in front of everyone gonk gonk crying crying gonk gonk crying crying gonk gonk crying crying

Commented on: Mon Dec 25, 2006 @ 01:59am


	i dont like it that much, its not one of my best works, but it took me a hour 2 write 3nodding 3nodding

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Commented on: Sun Dec 31, 2006 @ 03:59pm


	Its good aww great now u make me eel like writen one! scream <bangs head on the computer table> "i'm okay, really" xp

Commented on: Sun Dec 31, 2006 @ 04:02pm


	Feel* it's okay Boa dont cry.... hey maybe u should get it published. i got one published in 7th grade, but my parents nvr bought the book..... crying crying crying crying cry

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Commented on: Thu Jan 04, 2007 @ 02:00am


	damn yuna...you are really good at poetry... biggrin

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