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The Jurnal of the seadragonmaster
Things i feel like sharing..
Chapter one of a thing i am working on
Prologue: "Hahahahaha it is over, your energy is weak, you have no power left in you. Surrender yourself to me." Ice monster said. "If you do I will spare your friends from their cold icy fate.*he points to the right where Tenko's friends were cacooned in ice and they were going to die of temperture drop.* "...."Tenko said for he wanted to save his friends. and if he had to give his own live...* "DON"T DO IT."his firends cried out. "Just kill him and we will be fine." *before he could decide..he thought...*"....I..."

Chapter one: Tenko's begginning.

Tenko was what is a Dragon who can take on many forms, but no matter what form he took....human wise, he was hated by humans. Not because of what he did or looked like, it was because of what he is. Humans were scared of what Tenko would do, they herd lies from the hunters that Dragons took princesses and treasures from towns or villages, but Tenko knew it was not true. Dragons did not take what is not theirs, unless it was given. Humans did not care, so they would try to harm, even kill Tenko. Once they hired a Slayer to kill him.....the hunter failed...and died. Tenko had traveled form town to town looking for someone to travel with or to stay with.

Then one day Tenko was surrounded by hunters, when all of a sudden, a group of beings stoped them. Some were Wolf Demons, some were saga, (a human that like the taste of blood), and a few others, elves even, and there was one dragon that was like Tenko but very different, There were a few humans too. Before Tenko could see them, he blacked out form the energy that he lost fighting the hunters. When he came to, he was surrounded by the group. Tenko was shock to see people actually fought to help him. He was real shock to see humans surround him and without them having swords or daggers.

"Hi" said one of the humans. "Are you ok?" asked a Wolf Demon. *Tenko just kept looking at them and said "..yeah i am ok..." . The elves offered to heal him but Tenko nodded and repled"I can heal myself quick". As he finished saying that he hovered his hand over his chest and a blue light orb healed him.

The group asked him if they could travel with him for a while. Tenkodidnt't mind, after all it was what he wished for. After many days of travel, Each one became a allie for each other, and to Tenko.

One day Tenko's friends were kidnapped by a Ice monster. Tenko knew who to ask....The humans of the village. He asked the leader of the town. Out of fear, the leader told Tenko :"We hired him....we were hoping he would kill you. We said to him 'do it anyway possible'". Tenko thought to himself"...anyway possible...so are my friends just pawns to these people?" Tenko said"...alright then..i will make you ..Humans a deal. If I defeat this being, you will stop hiring thing to kill me, and tell other villages and towns to do the same..." "and if you lose?" Asked the leader. "..Then you wont need to..for if I lose..i will be dead."

Minutes later Tenko had found the monster and also his friends....his friends were frozen in ice,but still alive, still breathing. "What is the meaning of this?" Tenko asked. "oh do not worry for now..they are in a ice cacoon, able to live for a while, but they can't move..if you fight me and win..you will be able to save them, if you surrender, I will free them. If you lose..I will kill them and you." Tenko replied"...FINE I WILL FIGHT YOU.

For hours they fight but no matter what, the ice monster seemed powerful. Tenko falls on his knees, right arm in his blood, right hand barely holding on to his sword, and feels like he can't fight no more. "...Damn it.."Tenko thought to himself. "Hahahahaha it is over, your energy is weak, you have no power left in you. Surrender yourself to me." Ice monster said. "If you do I will spare your friends from their cold icy fate.*he points to the right where Tenko's friends were cacooned in ice and they were going to die of temperture drop.* "...."Tenko said for he wanted to save his friends. and if he had to give his own live...* "DON'T DO IT."his firends cried out. "Just kill him and we will be fine." *before he could decide..he thought...*"....I..."Tenko said as he began to stand up. "....will...not surrender...I would rather die." The Ice monster replied" Then so be it*charges at Tenko*" Tenko lifted his right armbut made his right hand drop the sword. "Tenko what are you doing?!?!?!"cried out one of the wolf demons. The ice monster was ten steps away from Tenko. " SWORD OF LIGHT WHOM TO I RELEASE" as he said this, his wings and tail appeared, and a huge beam of light came from his right hand and went straight to the Ice Monster... "NOOOOO" It cried "how could I Fail?!?!" The light was bright..as it faded, no remains of the monster could be found.....for it was destroyed. Tenko freed his friends.

A few hours later the villagers waited for at least the monster to return, for they wanted to know who won. "Look!!"cried one of the villagers. The leader ran to see. "....IT IS THEM" cried the leader. For Tenko and his friends came to the entrance. "...I won..now don't be a human and go against your word" Tenko said. "I will send messangers to every village and town." Replied the leader. "thank you"

From that day he was not hunted by hired beings, but still hated and hunted. Tenko and his friends departed from each other, but they each knew that They would meet Tenko again.

((I dedicate this chapter to all my friends who have been my friends no matter what...I Thank You all.))






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missa188
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 05:16pm
kool and wicked awesome 3nodding


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 07:06pm
Awsome~!



Saki Honatia
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Drobvirks
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 07:11pm
Wow, Seadragon. Thats really amazing ^_^
But more details ans such would be nice. Im sure you could write a much longer, and more explaining text. Like, why they where kidnapped and how it happened and such.

Still. Great job! =3


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 08:42pm
well if i did make it longer, i dont think ppl would have time to read it



seadragonmaster
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Drobvirks
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 27, 2006 @ 12:47pm
Yeah I know that. But it would of be good if you did, if you want to become a good writer.
There's things you should know about writing: people always ask them slefs questions while they're reading and they would also like to know answers. So to make a good book, you would need to think very logicly and get everything to fit together, like, there will always be a answer to whats happening in the book. Like if someone is doing something wierd in the book, you ask your self the question "Why did he do that?" and maybe later in the book, there will be a answer to it.

Im not a very good writer, but my teacher's always telling me stuff like that. Like always giving exapmles and good explonations. XD

But also, it depends on what kind of book you're writing... umh, okay. I should stop talking now... XD


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