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I like to write poetry and random stuff about my day.
Poem: Sin to love you?
Sin to love you?

I was soaring high and free.
They knocked me down to my knees.
Tied my arms behind my back and Placed me on a tourture rack.
I look around and c**k my head,
Remembering when last I slept in bed.
That night was wonderful,Oh its true.
My mind was filled with dreams of you.
I wait to die.Time passes slowly by.
I fill my mind with thoughts pure and true.
Knowing that my angel will watch over you.
They're going to kill me, I know it is so
But I dont really want to go.
I asked them what I did so wrong.
I think they thought I knew all along.
I wonder what it could have been.
Some say my love for you was sin.
I shake my head and close my eyes.
It's time for me to say "goodbye".
Just to say one last thing to you.
My love for you was love pure and true.






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Dark_Deamon_Zero
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 05, 2007 @ 09:04pm
eek Wow.... thats real deep.............


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 12, 2007 @ 01:36am
Wow totally cool, deep, and good!



Soccerplaya3
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Yelsu
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 01, 2007 @ 04:31pm
This poem is beautiful in a depressing, sad way. It is something like Edgar Allen Poe's style of poetry, darkly touching.


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