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"Loss" Oh no! I caught the poetry virus! XP Yes here is a poem. It came after certain events. Well, here it is. Contructive critisism is allowed. ^_^ "Loss" My body, a shell. An empty shell, no soul. I am looking, but not seeing. I am listening, but not hearing. I am searching, but not finding. I am venting, but not releasing. I am yelling, but not speaking. Consolation is given, but none is recieved. I am hurting, but not feeling. I am alive, but not living. An execrable tradgedy, a harrowing defeat. A painful blow, a vigorous shove. It's over, battered and beaten, I walk with a sting in my heart.

Posted by: garendoor Sun Jan 07, 2007 @ 02:10am

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Commented on: Sun Jan 07, 2007 @ 02:11am


	I think the poem's nice, you did a good job.

Commented on: Sun Jan 07, 2007 @ 02:25am


	Though I'm into writing sad stuff myself It's really good! Keep that virus!

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Commented on: Sun Jan 07, 2007 @ 05:14am

Commented on: Sun Jan 07, 2007 @ 11:28am


	i like it, its strong. if i wasnt so worried about poetry thiefs that exist on the internet i would put my best one in my journal, but i fear that it would stolen...

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Commented on: Mon Feb 12, 2007 @ 12:19am

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