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Trying at a new poem.
So far away, but feeling so close.
Looking around the empty room with a feeling of you there.
I grab the empty air, hoping something that will never be.
Then I think, knowing you can hear me.
Your ghostly image always floating by.
Then I slowly fall asleep, still wishing what can't be.






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x Kuron x
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 27, 2007 @ 06:43pm
wow i like it
its very deep and
has a somewhat lost feelin
which is the kinda poetry i like good job


commentCommented on: Fri Feb 02, 2007 @ 10:13pm
You grab the words I reach for but cannot get myself.
I hate you. gonk
Ah well.
Tata



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