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My Insane Ramblings.
i quit my other...i'm going back to bad poetry...
I guess i really like Writing poems....
here's more poetry!!!
shadows-
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-they are behind you,
below you,
in front of you.
they are evreywhere if you just look,
some are normal,
some are not.
in the deepest blue shadow,
there lurkes an evil,
yet in the lightest shadow there lurkes doubt,
so can we say there are 'normal' shadows,
or are they all riddled with shadows greater than themselves?
are the shadows shadowed?
or are they shadows at all?
are they tainted shadows,
or are they 'normal'?
are the oceans pulling down this ship of hope?
by:Sakuka
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You left me
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you left me in this storm,
the storm that claimed my life,
you left me to die here,
the storm may have claimed my life,
but it didn't end it,
I survived,
I remember.
but now that you see me again,
you say you love me,
I know your lieing again,
you want me gone,
forever.
but you chase after me,
you hunt me,
you seek power over me,
I won't let you have it!
not again.
By: Sakuka






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~Dreams of Eternity~
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 06, 2007 @ 01:00am
Shadows are in reality, when the sun is shining, the most conspicuous thing in a landscape, next to the highest lights. The question most of us wish to know the answer to is do we stand in our own light, wherever we go, and fight our own shadows forever? Very nice poem, btw.

Finally, a little gale will soon disperse that cloud and blow it to the source from where it came. The very beams will dry those vapors up, for every cloud engenders not a storm. ^_^

Your poetry brings quite a few thoughts to my mind. I love poetry that makes you think and also poetry that puts you in that individual's current position.

~Dreams of Eternity~


commentCommented on: Thu Feb 08, 2007 @ 09:05pm
are you sure you can't read minds?



Sakuka
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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 20, 2007 @ 01:14am
These poems were really awesome too!!! You're really good at poetry!! the emotions are so clear and well-written! 3nodding


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