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Truth Storm This is just this random poem I came up with when I was looking out my window today....I felt like weather like this deserves some sort of memento or something. The idea of truth hidden by snow and mist has always seemed interesting to me, so I decided to write about it. I hope you like it! I'm not that good at writing poems, but I tried! Truth Storm A whirlwind sent when someone grinned A maelstrom of wispy white powder Something stirs on the Eastern Wind And the shouts of nature get louder The rooftops all layer away And the queen of snow keeps crying The people all seem to sway Now every emotion is flying Nothing to see but a swirling blanket A message sent in trust This warning says we can't just fake it We can't hide in the whitening dust To face the Truth is to confront a snowstorm To wipe the lies from the shelves To look in the eye of how we were born And to learn to trust ourselves.

Posted by: the silver fire Tue Feb 13, 2007 @ 10:55pm

I'm a girl, in real life, my avi is just.....confused. sweatdrop

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Commented on: Tue Feb 13, 2007 @ 11:00pm


	I think it's wonderful! It even rhymes!!!! It's one of those deep poems too...

Commented on: Tue Feb 13, 2007 @ 11:38pm


	Really? Thank you! I'm surprised!

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Commented on: Wed Feb 14, 2007 @ 02:18am


	Lub it, Zoe! ^^ Totally describes the mysterious dispositon behind the snowflakes...The meaning of a snow storm... mrgreen

Commented on: Wed Feb 14, 2007 @ 02:18am


	I ditto everything Emma said!!! It's amazing. And what did I tell you about dissing your poetry writing skills?! I feel so stu-, uh, I mean silly. What I was thinking when I was out in the snow is, "Goddamn it! I got snow down my shirt again!!" Aren't I so poetic and graceful?! stare

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Commented on: Wed Feb 14, 2007 @ 02:44am


	laughs a* off* I love your "gracefulness" Maya.... rofl It's amusing.... And thank you, Maya and Zeta!! It's really nice of you guys to say that!!! Zeta, you have a really funny way of describing things....like, I can totally see you in my head saying "oh yes, the disposition behind the snow...it's wonderfully described...." rofl blaugh

Commented on: Wed Feb 14, 2007 @ 02:55am


	What do you mean you can't write poetry? THIS IS AMAZING!!! I love it. I love it. I love it. I.LOVE.IT. I want to marry it I love it so much. Okay. Maybe not.

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Commented on: Wed Feb 14, 2007 @ 03:07am


	Wow..... If it gets CLAIRE enthused than I guess it can't be THAT bad... sweatdrop Thank you!! I'm flattered, really! It's just that usually when I post poems people don't comment, not a single person, so I figure they must be so gosh-darned terrible that no one wants to tell me. sweatdrop

Commented on: Wed Feb 14, 2007 @ 04:07am


	Honestly, it's just because we can be so goddamned lazy. Not because you're bad. I really really loved that poem you showed me in our pm!!

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Commented on: Wed Feb 14, 2007 @ 04:22am


	blush thank you.... redface that's really sweet! I liked the poem you showed me too! It was surprising, cause I've never read any writing of yours like that, and I thought it was REALLY good.

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