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Starheart Ultimatum
Assault on the Universe Stronghold


We found ourselves in Lord High Evolutionary’s Counter-Earth, a replica of our own Earth. Here Dr. Stranger is trying to tapped into Eternity’s power in order to create a cosmic wall for the coming menace. “Starheart will we here any micro-second.” Dr. Strange remark to High Evolutionary. High Evolutionary a man once know as Dr. Wyndham, a man of science who became the living testimony of evolution. By using his highly advance exoskeleton, Wyndham gained control of the forces need to created a double-ganger of planet Earth. Dr. Strange once a man of science too was turn into Sorcerer Supreme, high status of ultimate magic user. And defender of the cosmic balance.

Before Wyndham could summon any reinforces, in order to battle the upcoming threat. He is brutally assaulted by one Stranger‘s incantations. Who’s mind had being taking over by Starheart astral form. Nearly killed by Stranger’s spell, Wyndham was able to break to Stranger’s mind by using his telekinesis. This had the lasting effect of leaving Stranger catatonic. And allowing Starheart to take possession of Wyndham damage body. After removing Wyndham's mind from the cybernetic exoskeleton and claiming Wyndham's body for the taking. Starheart removed Stranger’s as magic powerhouse of the universe. By taking the Eye of Agamotto and the Cloak of Levitation, from him and fusing into his own armor. “Useless, is this the best the universe can throw at me? Starheart! Pathetic!”

Citadel in Time


In the 31st century that existed in the parallel dimension of Earth-691. Guardian of the Galaxy struggle defeating Zarrko, the Tomorrow Man a time travel criminal heralding from the 23rd century. Thanks to a combination of Starhawk’s cosmic power and Giruad the new Phoenix host, time warping abilities. There able to send the time traveler to his native time, yet not before he can say one final words. “Beware of not a stars, radiant the same light.” Vance Astro the pseudo leader of the Guardians remarks how ironic is this, sense the last start in the solar system die out 4centuries ago. “If it weren’t for those artificial-starts we would by in some major trouble don’t you think guys?"

Moral was not high for the Guardians, on there last mission, they had lost some valuable allies and most of all great friends. There timeline Sorcerer Supreme, Krugarr and Charlie-27. However things were worse then expected, for Krugarr had never finish his trying on Talon his sorcerer apprentice. Protege there once-friend, turned out the by a religious renegade on hopes of becoming a god. Stopping the mad messiah took the lives of Martinex, Yondu and Talon. Lucky for them it also took the lives of there very own enemies, the Stark to stop him. Talon was bury with his magical artifacts; Wand of Watoomb, and the Book of the Vishanti. This leaf them only with Nikki, Giruad, Starhawk and Vance.

However there celebration would last long as the deliriums criminal Protege stole a Cosmic Cube, heightening his own abilities. And had teleported in front of them, mocking them. “Vance, do you understand the important of my mission? As the Spirit of Vengeance, is my duty to rescue the past.” Protege teleported the Wand of Watoomb in front of him. Nikki was trying her best to create a flare in order to distracted him, it however fail. When Protege use the cosmic cube to disperse, the energies on pocket dimension. “Well I try…” Protege was fully able to combine the power of both of them artifacts. Causing a time flux, from which escape to the past. Starhawk cold personality severally clash with Vance’s happy go-go attitude. Nearly refusing to follow his orders, claming them to by weak and soft. “If you would had let me Vance, I would had killed him! And neither of this would by happening.” Vance along the other Guardians follow him. Giruad would had prefer not to. “Again in the past? Last time, we when back to the 21century, I had a cold for three days!! You know were suppose to by super heroes.” The Guardians vanish thought the portal.






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Dawn Arrow
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 24, 2007 @ 03:02am
I have only one thing to say to you...Watoomb. rofl

*smiles* I like your sense of humor when you write. This is still a bit choppy, but I'm impressed with the vocabulary. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sat Feb 24, 2007 @ 03:35am
I think its very cool. Keep it up and one day you'll be an author!! smile 3nodding smile



xXYunaRiverXx
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Dragoness Arleeana
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commentCommented on: Sat Feb 24, 2007 @ 04:25am
deffinatly awsome!! Keep on writing! ^_^

Yes, your vocab is really getting better!


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 28, 2007 @ 11:13pm
This sounds really intresting. I like!

Like the others said, I noticed your vocabulary has gotten better, but you still need some work. Keep on writting though and you'll improve again!



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Mairin Rainilt
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 01, 2007 @ 03:29am
This kind of stinks, everyone said what I would've said. Guess what? It flows! Well, most parts. I'd have to say that it's great as an outline for the beginning of a plot. Now you just need to get a smashing ending, fill the middle with adventure, and get it in book-reading form, and you have a real story!


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