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My evil deeds today:
March 9, 2005
As the bodies sway gently in the breeze
I wonder to myself
what compelled me to do such a thing
their faces twisted into eternal screams of pain
some of them still writhing in their noose
I laugh aloud
and realize it was my hatred for them
those without care
those without regret
and all feelings of remorse leave me
they now hang from the trees
a monument to the evil that lies within every human heart
they say I'm depraved, disturbed, wicked,
maybe
or are you lamenting the loss of your own?
A day will come
when my dark dreams become an even darker reality
darkness is bad?
is it not but the absence of light?
where has the light gone?
The human heart
it once showed great tenderness
but now realizes the folly of it all
selfish am I?
The heart bound in darkness has no self
it desires only to envelope the rest of the world in darkness
where no light penetrates
and cries of anguish will be uttered by all






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Kaitou_Kitsune
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 10, 2005 @ 12:53am
Interesting..... but don't let your readers now exactly what you're saying. The meaning of poetry is to find the hidden meaning within the hidden meaning.


commentCommented on: Sat Mar 12, 2005 @ 09:17pm
hey, its me lys.... srry, i havnt been on in a while..... and then i saw ur comment on my journal, and i did what u said.... lol ok, well pm me.... peace out



lysner
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Tamara_Moon
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 15, 2005 @ 01:52am
Nice! Thats really good, very dark


commentCommented on: Thu Mar 24, 2005 @ 05:08pm
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fiona_dragon
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lily_maiden
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 18, 2006 @ 04:57am
wow, that was beautiful and terrible all at once... sad On a lighter note, wow, you sound like you could be a boss in organization 13! ^_~
I always knew you're a good writer...^^


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