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Blood Line: The chronicals of Syra
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The clouds moved slowly over the moon high above a seemingly peaceful and small forest. Screams could be heard from a large house resting on the forest's edge.
"Wait!! No! Syra!! Stop!", inside a boy screamed slumping and sliding down the wall,"Syra! It's me! Stop!" His head was bleeding severly and he was breathing heavily, having cuts all over him. He was staring shakingly at an approaching dark, shadowy figure. The figure began to chuckle,"It's funny you still think I'm Syra." The boy shook his light hair out of his face and stuttered,"W..What?!"
The overwhelming figured moved closer into the light, showing a girl. But she wasn't just a girl, her eyes were red and slitted. She had weird purple markings all across her face and body, where she wore a black laced wrap over a gray sleeveless shirt. Black and sliver, spiky hair fell in front of her face and down her back to her waist. Her thick belted boots went all the way up to her knees where they met with her gray leggings under a black ripped skirt.
But mostly the boy stared wide-eyed at her large fangs and fierce, murderous eyes. She smiled an evil, deathly smile and exclaimed,"Call me...ARYS!" The boy stopped moving and gapped in horror," N...no.....nooooo.."
A terrible sound followed, as he screamed in mixed fear and pain and his blood splashed upon the wall for which he was pressed against. And Arys laughed a satisfied and deadly laugh.....

Well don't worry more is coming soon! Hope you liked it. Plz comment! biggrin





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    Colette Longbottom
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    commentCommented on: Sat Mar 03, 2007 @ 04:27pm
    Good details! But I was hoping for the actual comic you drew.


    commentCommented on: Sat Mar 03, 2007 @ 06:00pm
    i like it a lot, but i think the comic itself is much cooler. in the comic you can acually see whats going on and not just hear about it. but since you cant do that on gaia, this is the next best thing. biggrin smile sweatdrop stressed whee wink cool lol sad surprised mad razz eek pirate ninja 4laugh rofl talk2hand heart wink



    snowfire2121
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    Rinoga
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    commentCommented on: Tue Mar 06, 2007 @ 01:39am
    I like this as much as the manga! BUT! Syra always reminds me of Eragon for some strange reason, then now her alter ego is syra but spelled backwards.... and the purple markings remind me of Saskue! LOL! LOVE THE DETAILS!!


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