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You better not read this D:< I'm warning you....^_^ it's too gruesome!
Poems, mostly. I also put in my ideas for new stories because i'm going to be a writer some day! So yeah, most of my own work, rarely i'll add in a favorite song!
Sonnets are hard to write- therefore I tried xD
Sonnet World

In a vast modern world of smoke and grime
Families live on well fare, on the street
Men work to create the ultimate crime
To feed their families and make ends meet
Wondering when comes new revolution
To rejoice in a world happy and pure
To rid this world of smoke and pollution
Dreams of cleanliness are sure to allure
Tired of living a life of disgust
Worn hands, worn faces from poor life styles
to acquire life, action is a must
Too many thieves, crooks, and *****
Many dreams of utopias surround
Many want safety, to rest and be sound

PLEASE DO NOT STEAL MY WORK, THIS IS MY OWN ORIGINAL POEM.

In case you don't know what defines a sonnet, they are supposed to be exactly fourteen lines and all must have the same rhyme scheme (ababcdcdefefgg) and each line must have the same amount of syllables (mine, each line has ten syllables check for yourself)
Thanks for reading, leave a comment and tell me what you think of it quality wise since I know I met all the requirements.






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forgot my medicine
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 29, 2007 @ 08:19pm
it's... good... yet a little disturbing with the ***** thing.


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