this is one i wrote for a sertant someone she liked it now ill let u guys comment on it so let me know if u like it
soothe the ache that gnaws at me
wrap me warm in that tender place
tame the beast that howls inside
bond close to you by healing grace
whole and smiling I'm alive again
sweet surrender to my lover's call
she stops my endless litany of doubt
her nimble tongue pushed deep
warmly filling up my hungry mouth
while fingers soft, stroke my loins
rising ready to meet our needs
sweet surrender to hunger's call
silken flesh slides lithely over me
quiet strength that in love's service
she pins me gasping to our bed
legs round my head, she rocks
till we tumble locked together
sweet surrender to passion's call
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