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Krazy Kiwis Krazy Life
A place for me to journal about all the krazy things that happen in my life, and get out all the krazy ideas i have in my head, if you're looking for a frequently updated journal though, look elsewhere.
Where is the light?
okay, this is something from my english journal, we have to write in it everyday, thank god the teacher doesn't actually read the entries, or I'd have been sent to guidence for counsling a loooooooooooong time ago...well, it's just a random poem that I based off of an AMAZING one my sister wrote, so if you like it, PM crumpistle and beg her to let you read hers, ^.^

Where is the light?
The light that will come to me
Come to carry me away
And where is the dark?
The dark that will devour me
Swallowing me as I waste away
I am stuck here
Here in shades of smudgy grey
But I feel only pain
There is no joy, no happiness
Only sarrow, and grievence
For how am I expected to live?
Live as I once did?
How can I feel anything but pain?
All that's left is a hole
A giant raw sore
Where once I was whole
As I clutch and I curl
Contorting myself to stop the pain
There is but one thing on my mind
And where is the light?
The devine light
As I've been told
To come and rescue me
To pull me into the darkness
Were I will plunge into nothingness
And I will finally be reuinited
With my love
So, where is the light?






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iDolli
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 01, 2007 @ 01:59am
Is Crumpistle someone I know? It reminds me of Stormy's writing kindah. Oh and it is good, you like basing your poems on ones you have read huh.


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 01, 2007 @ 04:28pm
generally, no, I just LOVED my sisters poem, and yeah, you know Crumpistle, tis caitlin, my actual sister, lols



CelestialStarSky
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crumpistle
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 05, 2007 @ 07:48pm
umm......thanks for giving me some of the credit.....I stll wonder what I recieved on that poem.!.


FIREFLY LIGHTS UP MY WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!@!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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