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Just as the title suggests.


Sasoris_Puppet
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Broken Puppet
Ever have an odd, random thing that just popped into your head and turned out to be something half decent? Well, this poem is just one of the many examples in the world. I'm not quite sure what it's about and when I wrote it I had no real plan. Anyway, hope you all will enjoy this.^^

Broken Puppet

Broken Shakles
Broken dreams
The puppet plays in his first scene

Swinging, dancing
The crowd enhancing
the delight of the show
but they'd never know...

The puppeteer's whims
shown through his doll's strings
Inside the puppet is crying
while he feels he's slowly dying.

These strings the maniquine wants to break
He's taken all that he can take.

Broken shackles
Broken dreams
The puppet plays his final scene





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Envy_of_the_7
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comment Commented on: Thu Apr 12, 2007 @ 02:53am
eek Damn...you're a good poet...
its been a while since inspiration struck me...you can tell by looking at my manuscript...anywho, this is extremely good!


comment Commented on: Fri Apr 13, 2007 @ 12:00am
Thank you very much, Mike.^^



Sasoris_Puppet
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The blue haired menace
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comment Commented on: Sat Apr 14, 2007 @ 02:05am
It's really creepy but really good as well.


comment Commented on: Sat Apr 14, 2007 @ 02:16am
Thabnks. Kaptian.^^ Hmmm... I've never thought of it as creepy and it wasn't intended that way, but I like the fact you interpreted it that way.^^ I like seeing differant veiwpoints.



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