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Alt. stories about Hiku
these are altered stories from the real story.
Hiku's story (1st alt. edition)
“Man nothings ever going happen to me while I’m are on guard here. Who would be stupid enough to attack the Rain Village?” The Guard, at the front Gate to a massive Ninja village, said. Just then it begins to rain and the guard runs over to a tree and pulls out the umbrella that he had stashed away in the branches. “And it’s always raining! I hate rain and I hate doing this job almost as much as I hate to cleaning out the horse stables,” the guard shudders at the thought of shoveling horse manure. “I’ll never go back to that job, I’ll kill myself before that happens,” just then there is an ominous laughter from a tree about twenty yards away from him. “Who’s there!” the guard pulls out a kunai and readies himself for a fight. The mysterious voice then says in a cold tone “….well I guess I could tell you since you’re about to die anyway,” the guard suddenly feels a cold shiver down his spine. “My name is Hiku Satori Jenki and that’s all you’ll need to know.” The guard then hears something rip through the umbrella and hit the ground. He looks down and sees nothing but rain water. “Well! Are you going to attack!” the guard yells looking back toward the trees, anxious for a fight. “My my, are we not the anxious type….very well then.” Hiku chuckles as the rain begins to pick up. The guard readies for any attack that Hiku may throw at him. The rain was getting harder and harder and the guard couldn’t see anything. “Now do you wish to die quickly or slowly?” Hiku said in a playful tone as thou he was enjoying this. “Argh, Where is he? The rain is too thick, I can’t see,” “well I don’t know I guess it would depend on what you attack me with!” then the guard heard the tearing sound again. “Wait! It’s the rain! He’s using the rain to attack!” the Guard runs for the Gate. “I must warn the village!” He yells as he gets to the gates entrance, Hiku smiles from his hiding spot in the trees. “Quickly it is then.” The Guard was then torn to bits by the rain before he even had a chance to scream. The rain calms down and Hiku drops down from his tree. He is wearing a black rain cloak with the hood up. His hair was dark red, long, and bushy. The hood hid his eyes from view and his body was covered by the cloak. “You had it lucky my friend,” Hiku said as he walked up to the shredded remains of the Guard, “you died quickly unlike the rest of this accursed village,” Hiku chuckles and then looks at the Village Gate. “This village put me through hell and now I have returned to repay the favor,” Hiku remembers back to the day his village betrayed him and his family by slaughtering them all but him. He was able to escape the massacre by hiding his body under his father’s already dead corpse. It was exactly seven years ago and Hiku was having dinner with his family. He heard a scream come from outside as his house began to burn. Hiku’s father, Canas, ran out to see who had started the fire and was stabbed in the forehead by a village anbu. Hiku’s mother, Kana, screamed and covered the doorway with the table. Hiku ran into his room and grabbed a kunai ready to fight the enemy. When he had returned to the Dining room his mother was dead and the anbu was roaming the house looking for Hiku. Hiku ran outside, “Hiku hide under my body, the anbu will believe you had escaped and look for you elsewhere,” Hiku, terrified, did as his father said. The anbu walked outside and looked around. Hiku held his breath as the anbu ran passed him and off into the forest. “Yo-you were right father…” Hiku climbed out and looked down at his already dead father. “I promise they will pay father….this village will pay,” Hiku throws his fist into the gate and clenches his teeth in anger at the memory of that awful day. “Today is the day…I have waited and trained for seven years for this, today this village will pay with their lives!”

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