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A cute girl pop out from the door and the girl have angel wings and a white dressalso white shoes. She introducted herself and he need Zack to save heaven like his father did 10 year ago. He enter though the door with Mary and they went to a different wold in a sec. they was flowing then land on a green grass. Mary dissapear. he found out he got a werid looking ring on him and he try to take it off but he can't. He explore the area and there a cute looking girl, she have pink hair, school unfiorm, and a cute face.She was sleeping until she spotted him she sream......and hit him with her school bag. After 2 hour of hiting and sreaming, she say so....much sorry her lung is sooooo dry.they introduce each other and her name is Michelleand she will help him in his quest. End of Chapter two.....

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How you like it? I think it bader than the other one...

Lets start at the beginning....There is a baby named zack he just been born. He have a werid birthmarked on his back it look like a angels wings and a werid looking seal and a fox tail. When he get older he look more cuter and more polite to other. Now he is in high school......that where he be called Angel _Fox boy...... He have these werid dreams he was in a different world called heaven! During his Math class the room turn white and there is nothing but his classmate and a gate. The gate is made of metal and have two picture of a girls angel. Then a Cute looking girl pop out the door.....then that his faith will begin.....
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