Ok I am writing this cause' my birthday is coming up. (AUGUST 21ST!!)
The Birthday Of Her Dreams
It was the night of August 21st, 2008. Deanna was turning 13 and she wanted to have all her friends over for a slumber party. She had chips, soda, balloons, decorations, goodybags, bla bla bla etc. etc. She wanted it to go PERFECT.
But Nothing Is Ever Perfect...
Deanna greeted all her friends. And then she greeted Macey, who happened to be her absolute BEST FRIEND. Macey had gotten her a wonderful gift. What was it though? confused She wondered... Deanna would have to wait til' morning.
They all had fun dancing and singing along with the music. When Deanna decided it was time for cake. Carvel's Ice Cream Cake with those little chocolate crunchies.(her fave!! heart ) They all ate up. Then Deanna looked at Macey "Could you give me a hint of what the gift is?" biggrin Deanna asked.
"Sorry Dee, you will have to wait til' morning." rolleyes Replyed Macey.
They stayed up half the night gossiping, truth or daring, putting on makeup, etc. When they all fell asleep without realizing it.
Finally, it was morning. "OMG! GIRLS WAKE UP! WE FELL ASLEEP!" Shouted Aly.
"Omg, it's morning?" 3nodding Asked Deanna. She couldnt wait to open all her gifts.
She opened all her friends gifts, they were all incredibly amazing. But her eyes opened wide eek when she saw Macey's gift standing in front of her. She gently ripped off the rapping paper.
It was a small brown box with... Holes in it? "OMG! You got me a puppy!" biggrin Shouted Deanna.
She opened the box...
... biggrin
smile ....
... evil
It was a scorpion!!!!! burning_eyes
Deanna screamed as the scorpion bit into her hand. gonk Macey just stood there and laughed. rofl Her mom quickly called an ambulance. wahmbulance Deanna was taken to the hospital.
cry Deanna weeped as she was laying in the hospital bed, half conscience, vision fading.
Her parents, her brother, and the rest of her family stood there beside her, sobbing and hoping.
Deanna's head blurred, cry she turned towards her family, "I love you." heart
BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! wahmbulance
They all hugged each other and cryed for a long time. Then they prepared her funeral. It was the saddest day they had had in years.
Macey has not been found yet... But the cops are searching. wahmbulance To find the girl that poisoned poor Deanna.
Her motives are still not known. twisted
All we do know is, Deanna's party is over. FOREVER.
Forever...
THE END.
The Birthday Of Her Dreams
It was the night of August 21st, 2008. Deanna was turning 13 and she wanted to have all her friends over for a slumber party. She had chips, soda, balloons, decorations, goodybags, bla bla bla etc. etc. She wanted it to go PERFECT.
But Nothing Is Ever Perfect...
Deanna greeted all her friends. And then she greeted Macey, who happened to be her absolute BEST FRIEND. Macey had gotten her a wonderful gift. What was it though? confused She wondered... Deanna would have to wait til' morning.
They all had fun dancing and singing along with the music. When Deanna decided it was time for cake. Carvel's Ice Cream Cake with those little chocolate crunchies.(her fave!! heart ) They all ate up. Then Deanna looked at Macey "Could you give me a hint of what the gift is?" biggrin Deanna asked.
"Sorry Dee, you will have to wait til' morning." rolleyes Replyed Macey.
They stayed up half the night gossiping, truth or daring, putting on makeup, etc. When they all fell asleep without realizing it.
Finally, it was morning. "OMG! GIRLS WAKE UP! WE FELL ASLEEP!" Shouted Aly.
"Omg, it's morning?" 3nodding Asked Deanna. She couldnt wait to open all her gifts.
She opened all her friends gifts, they were all incredibly amazing. But her eyes opened wide eek when she saw Macey's gift standing in front of her. She gently ripped off the rapping paper.
It was a small brown box with... Holes in it? "OMG! You got me a puppy!" biggrin Shouted Deanna.
She opened the box...
... biggrin
smile ....
... evil
It was a scorpion!!!!! burning_eyes
Deanna screamed as the scorpion bit into her hand. gonk Macey just stood there and laughed. rofl Her mom quickly called an ambulance. wahmbulance Deanna was taken to the hospital.
cry Deanna weeped as she was laying in the hospital bed, half conscience, vision fading.
Her parents, her brother, and the rest of her family stood there beside her, sobbing and hoping.
Deanna's head blurred, cry she turned towards her family, "I love you." heart
BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! wahmbulance
They all hugged each other and cryed for a long time. Then they prepared her funeral. It was the saddest day they had had in years.
Macey has not been found yet... But the cops are searching. wahmbulance To find the girl that poisoned poor Deanna.
Her motives are still not known. twisted
All we do know is, Deanna's party is over. FOREVER.
Forever...
THE END.
