I was in a bit of a bad mood when i wrote this but i thought i did a great job. I gotta fix it so i can get a good grade an whatever so i decided to keep this artwork here.

Before:
Basically,its about how greed and douche baggerey have taken over the world and we want more minerals that we'll never get back when they're gone. People wanna go mining for them but whiney people said "no! dont hurt the freaky animals that could kill you!" so they haveta hold off the project till they find out how to not hurt them and fufill the greed.Suposedly [sic] its gunna start in 2011 or 2012 (oh no! the world's gunna explode!!). Some guy said he wants to do...something or other and study these fasinating (is he kidding?) creatures..i think... So yea thats all that really matters. "heh heh moo"

I tried again,it was better but i still couldnt turn it in...Ovious [sic] reasons

After:Basically,its about how people would like to get the minerals from the deep ocean,such as gold,silver,copper,lead an zinc. There are consentrations of metals surounding these thing that get the nickname smoke stacks (cause thats what they look like supposedly). "The vents sprout in areas of the ocean where the plates that form the earth's crust are moving apart. This coming apart-ness allows seawater to seep into the ocean floor, where it gets heated by the molten rock that lies under the earth's crust. When the water is heated, it rises and goes back toward the surface, gets heated, and rises to the top. The heated water brings with it precious metals that it leaches from the underground rock. The minerals cool in the frigid seawater and solidify into deposits. Places like China want these minerals for the economy that grows so well. New technology has been making it possible to mine these minerals,just to increase greed. What would happen is the machines would pump deep ocean water and the deposites onto a ship,have it sorted and dump the water back in the ocean. There are,of course, 'road blocks' that they need to get around. First,the deep ocean water is very acidic and could damage surface animals. The plan is to pump the water back to the deep ocean,strait an simple. Second there are all sorts of creatures like the "blind" shrimp that we shouldnt harm just to fill our greed. I'd personally agree but lets continue. Officals want to be ABSOTIVILY [sic] sure that these machiens wont hurt them. They're still working on a way to resolve this. Because the water is so different the animals are too so 'officals' want them to be safe so we can bust them open and take a look inside. they predict the technology shall be refined by 2011 or 2012. No one know how this might end... O.o

I try again

After-er: Basically,its about how people would like to get the minerals from the deep sea,such as gold,silver,copper,lead an zinc. There are consentrations of metals surounding these things called hydrothermal vents,or "smokers" Because on how they resemble underwater chimmineys.The vents sprout in areas of the ocean where the plates that form the earth's crust are moving apart. This allows seawater to seep into the ocean floor, where it gets heated by the molten rock that lies under the earth's crust. When the water is heated, it rises and goes back toward the surface, gets heated, and rises to the top,like a cycle. The heated water brings with it precious metals that it gets from the underground rock. The minerals cool in the seawater and solidify into deposits. Places like China want these minerals for fueling the economy,also other nations wish to claim some minerals too. New technoloy is making it possible to mine these minerals. What would happen is the machines would pump deep sea water and the deposites onto a ship,have it sorted and dump the water back in the ocean. There are,of course, 'road blocks' that they need to get around. First,the deep ocean water is very acidic and could harm surface animals. The plan is to pump the water back to the deep ocean,strait an simple. Second there are all sorts of creatures like the "blind" shrimp that live by the "smokers". Officals want to be absolutly sure that these machiens wont hurt them. Because the water is so different the animals are too, so officals want them to be safe so the project has been post-poned. The prediction is that the technology shall be refined by 2011 or 2012. "The mining needs to go forward, [and] the environments need to be sustained and conserved," Rona said. "That's a challenge, but it's doable."


Took me long enough huh? Ima sendin in the last one...left alot out though... And btw,im copywriting this...It belongs to ashz to ashz and none shall change that