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Deep and Dark? Well... maybe sometimes
I use this journal to keep track of where I'm going in life and mainly to let my friends know how I am and what's going on in my life since I can't talk to them always, if they wish to know.
Poetry
A poem I had to do for a school assignment. I based it on the main emotion I felt when I was younger... read and enjoy!


Anger

Anger bites and anger snaps
Anger writhes and anger wraps
Around my cold and lonely heart
A raging inferno, it’s about to start

Oh how big it grows in such few stages!
How it clashes, how it rages!
It enshrouds me in a towering flame
Only later to bring me tears of shame

For afterwards they only taunt me more!
And though at first I pretend they are such a bore
Anger again takes over me!
I thrash and scream and make them flee!

I wouldn’t be so angry if they’d leave me be
Why, oh why can they not see?
I’m tired of being angry all the time
Shall I take my leave, and end this rhyme?


Comments, anyone? sweatdrop






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Aristenella
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commentCommented on: Wed May 09, 2007 @ 03:59am
Cute. Reminds me of some sort of update Shakespeare or something.

I'm jealous, much. I never could rhyme.


commentCommented on: Thu May 10, 2007 @ 02:41am
I wish I could write a decent poem like that, too. surprised Rhymies!



Nostalgic Chains
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Thailiah
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commentCommented on: Sat May 12, 2007 @ 10:31am
cool!!!! i wish i could write poems sad and it rymys! YAY IT WAS REALLY DEEP REALLY REALLT DEEP


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