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Mythical Detective V -chapter one-
-Chapter One -

~A Past Better Forgotten~

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-2 Years ago-


She breathed in and out heavily, her back slammed against the wall. A revolver in her hand, she peeked her head quickly around the corner. From what it appeared, it was a large child, and a small woman. It appeared to be the Mother and Son, despite the son being quite larger and the mother smaller. She watched the son beg the mother for candy, the mother giving him candy.
Vivian remained to watch then stepped out from the corner, "Put your hands in the air Sins!" The mother stared at her, not moving, the child though stared at her, he licked his lips, "Gimmie Candy or I'll break your rips."
Vivian Hesitated, "No, Now put your hands in the air!" she called once again.
The child Grinned, "Okay then Lady," He bolted at her, hands in the air.
Vivian wide-eyed shot at the child again and again, not missing. The child stopped but did not fall. Blood emerged from his evil grin, "Pointless lady."
Vivian held her breath, and gulped. She watched the bullets seem to pop out of body hitting the ground. She looked down at her gun, out of bullets. The priest said this would happen, she changed the bullets, this time they were full of holy water, the sin didn't know that.
The Boy watched her, "Lady you should stop trying and just die like humans should!" he said and charged at her.
Vivian shot again, The sin being hit stopped and fell, seeming to dissolve. He was gone. Wait...there was the other sin! She pointed her gun at the small sin. Her eyes glowing red, she began to screech, and turned a violet color. The woman was now in the air, she looked like a ghost. Vivian's eyes widened in fear as the woman came straight at her, still screeching.


V launched her self upwards, now sitting up in her bed. "Only a nightmare...." she whispered to herself.

[[ On Tuesday there will be a new chapter, only if I have a good amount of Veiws and comments though. Oh and if you all didn't read her profile, I meant sin as in one of the 7 deadly sins. ]]






User Comments: [5]
Nu Dragoste Pisici
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Mon May 14, 2007 @ 04:06am


Not bad, a bit silly, but not bad.

Clarify what sin means in your story though. wink


Shinymon
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Mon May 14, 2007 @ 04:52am


The seven Deadly Sins. >>;


Nu Dragoste Pisici
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Mon May 14, 2007 @ 05:01am


Ah, okay. So this one was greed.


Shinymon
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Mon May 14, 2007 @ 05:22am


Are you sure?
I don't want to spoil anything, but he'll be revealed in the next chapter. XD


Nu Dragoste Pisici
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Mon May 14, 2007 @ 05:51am


Sounds good.

I'm gonna start working on a story of my own. Since I don't trust Gaia once a bit, I'll create ANOTHER blog on my Blogger account. It actually allows you to create multiple blogs!

You can, of course, see the link to my two blogs before on my journal. Once I get the first page done, I'll add my third link up.

EDIT: I got rid of the photo, it seemed distracting.

EDIT: I'm not gonna work on my story.


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