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Mythical Detective V -chapter two-
-Chapter two-

~I don't want a partner~




Vivian sat down at the desk, this was her office, she earned it after the seven sins. She sighed, and opened a drawer, inside a note book. The notebook seemed old, it had no title, and the lines on the paper were faded, barely even there, the paper was even turning a bit yellow. Although it looked like it didn't have very much importance it did, it contained every case she ever solved. She turned the pages, glancing at the pages as she turned the pages, until she came to a page entitled '7 Deadly Sins'.
She turned the page,

-Gluttony-
An inordinate desire to consume more than that which one requires.

-Punishment in Hell-
Force fed rats, toads and snakes.

-Association with-
The pig and the color orange.

-Personality-
Rude, threatening, wants food a lot.


Underneath all that was a sketch, of the large boy.
The boy had a blue and yellow horizontal striped propeller hat. His shirt was red and white, much like a shirt the the character Waldo would wear but short sleeved, and the blue jean overalls. It appeared her had no hair whatsoever, and everything seemed large, even his nose was large.

When she turned the next page, a knock on the door was heard, she shut the book shoving it in the drawer, "Come in," she called. A fairly tall man can in, he had blond hair and blue eyes, in his mouth was a cigarette. "Vivian, your new partners here," he said then hid behind the door. He was right too, Vivian threw a book at the door instantly, "I thought I told the council I didn't need one!" she shouted at him, "Jean who is it anyways?!" she yelled throwing another book, this time it actually hit someone, but not Jean. The boy fell back, he wore a red hoodie, he had blue eyes with messy black hair. "Owwww....."
Jean stared at him then looked at Vivian, "Him," he said pointing at him, "His name is Fric."


-Chapter three, on Thursday or Friday!-






User Comments: [4]
Nu Dragoste Pisici
Community Member





Wed May 16, 2007 @ 12:59am


Aww damn you for wheting my appetite.

That was good. You actually managed to engross me in your story, which, you haven't done with your previous story. It started that "movie-in-the-head", which is a VERY good sign.

I can't even do that, so, be proud. You've gained another skill that'll destroy me. XP


Jin The Slayer
Community Member





Wed May 16, 2007 @ 01:21am


Not bad.
:3


Shinymon
Community Member





Thu May 17, 2007 @ 12:57am


The chapter will come out tomorrow! I already have it done!


Nu Dragoste Pisici
Community Member





Thu May 17, 2007 @ 01:04am


Holy s**t, yay!

I kinda thought you'd wait till Friday and write it.


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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