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Commenting would be awsome along with the comments in the profile
Blank Page (I went freestyle on it so bear with me)
What should I do with this empty blank page
Should I write about me and my poverty
Should I write about pain and tears in the rain
and could I let my words flow free to surround me and drown me
so that I could see if they kill me or save me
Why must it ryme every time
the sharp but peaceful words of a poet
who wrote it
with dreams to have spoke it
Break the rules of the muteness of your voice
Make them understand your pain
the words which want to kiss your lips and the blank page
with the grey marks to turn into letter
letters to words
words to sentences
sentences from notes
that I wrote
and spoke with dreams of hope
That someone will read what I wrote
Make it nonsence to some
but sense to one


Clarissa Graves I made this please comment
lots of hugs heart






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Radio~Queen
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 12:29am
aww i love it


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 12:31am
*claps*
brava brava
it was really good
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devialy-loves jaejoong
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JennyIsShy
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 02:23am
That was really good, well to me at least.

You know, you should submit your poetry where people can
give their opinions on it, like SheezyArt or DeviantArt.


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 03:17am
I really like the fact that even though it doesn't rhyme, it's still very passionate.luv u!



PinUp_Burlesque Doll
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_Black R0se Dying_
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 06, 2007 @ 08:30am
u r really good writing poems! luv it


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