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If Only; Poetry
Inspiration put into words.
Florescent Friendship
Like a flower,
Friendship grows.
If its not cared for
It begins to dry out.

Take good care of the flower,
It will grow stronger
It will last longer.
Just like a well cared friendship...
It will last through time and space.

Let the flower bloom
For it will bring you happiness.
It will keep you smiling.
It will keep you company.
Just like a friend,
It won't leave you alone
It will care for you,
Like you will care for it.

(Just for the record, this is one of my oldest poems that I found lying on my computer and I don't like it much).


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  • User Comments: [2]
    If Only I Was A Slinky
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    Tue Jul 10, 2007 @ 09:12pm


    Yeah, I can see why you don't like it much... Not your best work, not trying to be mean either, just saying. I do like the second stanza though.


    Euri_Sushi
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    Tue Jul 17, 2007 @ 03:07am


    I know. I wrote it in a spur. I was chatting with my friend a long time ago, and just typed it in and wrote it. I didn't like it even then blaugh I'm back on Gaia now!!!


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