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Lord Ender's Poems log If you wanna laugh, cry , or just plain hate me, this is the place to start.
I'd like to share some poems and writing creativity
My Attempt to write a story
It's a Quarter pass 11 P.M. Ender finds himself alone in his office, arranging paper work and files that are due the next day. The music playing from the stereo was abruptly interrupted by Danchien, one of Ender's ex-business partner and now rival, a very dark-hearted man who has only thought about himself and how much profit he gains at the cost of others, and five of his goons. Breaking down the office door he approaches ender's desk wearing nothing but red, due to his fascination with blood, and his skin as pale as the snow falling outside. With a wicked smile he turns to look at the portrait of the individual he despises most in the world, suspended on the wall behind his chair and sarcastically says, "If it isn't the 'Great' Ender!"
"Tell me, what is a man who owns half the city, doing in his office at a time like this? Get a life, go party, do something!"

"Hello Danchien" said Ender, unaffected by what was going on.
"Unlike you, I rather spend my time at work than bother others when they're busy"

Danchien looks at Ender scornfully, but forcefully smiles. "Oh Ender, always so noble. Anyway, I'm here to talk business. As I said before, you own half of the city, and as you also know, my company is in charge of selling, how can I put it... 'goods' to street punks and I need half of your territory to make my business prosper. If you catch my drift"

Ender, who still has not gazed upon his business rival, answers. "Sorry Danchien but I don't make deals with jackasses like you, especially to sell your 'goods' as you so well put it."

Now, noticeably angry but able to keep his cool, Danchien steps a little bit closer to the desk and puts his hands flat above it, Mean while Ender has not so much as glance at his foe of many many years yet. "I'm willing to pay good money for it" said Danchien, "Come on, I'll make it worth your while".

This is when Ender paused to look up at him, frustration protruding from his eyes. "What kind of man do you take me for Danchien? Do you actually believe I get a thrill from hurting people for money? Do you think it's alright for people to suffer for ones ambitions? For YOUR ambitions?"

"I applaud your integrity" said Danchien with another forceful smile which quickly turned sour, "but it also annoys me"

"The answer is and will remain No" said Ender, looking back down at his paper work, hoping to finish soon. "You're free to go now"

Danchien stepped back, now letting his anger and frustration really show. "You think is that easy? There are six of us, only one of you" he reminded Ender, "Are you sure you wont reconsider!?"

"You're making empty threats which fall on deaf ears Danchien" said Ender with a sigh.

"You're trying my patience, I can get pretty unstable when I lose my patience"

"Do what you must, but the answer is still no" answered Ender, closing a file folder to begin with the last one for the night.

No longer able to control himself, he gives orders to his goons. " Boys... Trash the place!!" With that they begin a merciless attack on Ender's priceless items such as "Tete de Femme" a portrait by Pablo Picasso and other international gifts and souvenirs.

"Will you consider now" said Danchien, only to find a stare from Ender as an answer. "Damn it! You're a stubborn man, let's see if you won't reconsider your stupid moral decision after we've done to your face what we just did to your office"

Ender, now closing the last folder and standing up from his chair, looks at the five guys with Danchien and says, "you guys did well, you can take him away now"

"What is this?!?" demanded Danchien, "I thought you guys were with me"

"Not if they're detectives of my private police force working undercover" said Ender standing in front of his desk with his arms crossed, "Oh and don't worry about paying me back for property damage Danchien, they were fake"

"You b*****d!" shouted Danchien while he was taken away.

Ender smiled, turned around and said, "call it business"

The End




Hope you like it, if not im sorry i'll get better, promise ^_^

Lord Ender Havok
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  • User Comments: [1]
    Anngel Igrain
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    Wed Jul 25, 2007 @ 11:33pm


    I do like it Ender. It's a good start. Your character is strong, He's the kind of good guy that makes a lot of dangerous enemies. I'm, sure he can handle it though. heart


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