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Here I want to write anything that pops to mind, Mostly Stories. Also, here is where I plan to put weekly chapters from my novels.
Gifted Chpt. 11
11.
Tyren ran to the walls of the city. He saw the south army, composed of only 300 men. Tyren stared and wondered why so little people. They must have obviously not expected to be attacked. Tyren told his troops to wait and see if any more men came. They waited.
After several minutes, Tyren told them to attack. A Thousand of his soldiers ran, swords drawn, straight at the enemy. The enemy took out staffs and stones. Tyren groaned, He should've guessed, they sent Wizards and Summoners to attack. Wizards used a spell that made the whole
place foggy, then un-foggy. Tyren stared in disbelieve at a multitude of soldiers, who had been hidden under a Cloaking spell. The soldiers ran and slaughtered his. He sounded the horn, and the rest of his army pressed forward. The archers on the wall took aim, and the sky was filled
with arrows. The front line of his army raised their shield to protect themselfs from the arrows, the enemy front line suffered casualties. While the archers got another arrow ready, the front line stabbed the enemies new front line with spears. Then the archers shot. They repeated this
partern several times. Tyren was pleased, this was going to be an easy battle.

Golk cursed. He turned angry and yelled at no one in particular. He came so far just to lose. Someone spoke beside him. He turned and looked into the eyes of the new wench. He pretended to seem pleased.

"Oh, I didn't see you my love."
"No problem."
"What was it you were saying?"
"I could help out."

Golk thought for a while. She is a Powerist, so she could kille the Northen army. And if she doesn't, then I she will die and no longer bother me.

"Fine, but be carefull. It would crush me to lose you."
She blushed and walked of.

Golk sighed, she's gone good. HE stared as the girl walked into the open and closed her eyes. Is she truly that weak, that she must still close her eyes to use her power?!? The air around the battle field intensified. Golk wondered what she was doing. Then he saw it, the arrows from the
North army were redirected at the archers. They fell dead, and Golks army had the advantage, since the wind was blowing toward the North army, the Southern archers could easily shoot the North's front line. The tides where turning.

Tyren stared in disbelieve when the wind suddenly changed direction. He cursed and told Nahan if he could change its direction. The wind quickly changed direction. Tyren thanked Nahan.

Golk cursed again. The girl looked around dumbly before closing her eyes. The wind changed direction again.

Tyren felt the wind in his face. He turned and asked Nahan to change the direction of the wind. The wind changed.

Risha looked around once more, confused, before changing the wind.

"Nahan is your power failing you?"
"No, I have no idea what is making it change."
"So this isn't natural change?"
"No, someones using energy, also, to affect it."

Tyren looked at the flat field and saw her. Risha was standing there, eyes closed. He was going to tell an archer to shoot her in the ankle, when the western gate was breached. Tyren turned around and stared as the Southern army poured in. Tyren looked back toward the field and saw the Southern
army pour into the eastern gate, right under him. He jumped of the city's walls into the streets. He mounted Badazle and rode into battle.

The splintering noise of wood cracking made Jasar stand up, startled. He walked outside and saw that the city gate had been torn apart. Soldiers poured into the city. They passed houses, except for a few, which got burnt to the ground after being raided. He ran into the alley, avoiding the
soldiers. He needed a weapon, but couldn't find any. He walked over to a wrecked car, and extended his hand toward it. The metal floated in the air and slowly reformed itself into an axe. He grabed the axe and ran down the alley, stoping only when he saw a pile of rocks. Again, he stretched his arm
out and the rocks flew into the air. The rocks melted and reformed as a shield. He picked it up and ran into the street. HE started hacking away at any southern soldier that came to him. Then. he saw her. A girl walking down the street. She was the most beutifull thing ever. Her blue eyes sparkled as
she gazed around. Her blond hair was like strands of silver. She turned and looked at him, then closed her eyes. He continued to stare at her confused. Then he saw the ground shatter. A few chunks of earth came out and went straight at him. He extened his hand and the rocks broke apart. She stared
mouth agap. He smiled abd said gently.

"It's my power. I'm a materialist, I can reshape anything."

She closed her mouth and her eyes. A few more rocks came at Jasar. He broke everyone apart. Then, the clouds darkened, thunder crackled. The girl started to scream. A bolt of lightning came down at him, but someone came and swooped him out of there before it could do any harm.

Tyren tried to hold on to the person under his arm, but it was costing him. He put him down once he knew he was farfrom Risha. Tyren left the man and rode back to the battle. Jospen stayed behind to protect the man just in case. Tyren rode and slashed any man near him. He didn't even care if
the soldier was defenseless. He arrived at the middle of the citt=y when he saw her. Risha stood before him, eyes black with fury. She took out a sword. Tyren gasped, knowing what she wanted. Tyren took his sword out, and stepped off Badazle. He walked foward, facing Risha.

Risha closed her eyes, opened them, and ran at Tyren. Tyren hesitated, but not enough to make a difference. Clanking was the only thing that sounded as thier swords hit. Risha decided she should use her power.

Tyren stopped when Risha closed her eyes. He couldn't bring himself to attack while she wasn't looking. Boulders lifted all around him. He stood motionless. The boulders came rushing at him, whiatling as they split the air. The rocks were going to his head, certain to kill him if they hit him. He didn't
attack Risha, even though it would save im. He just stood there.

Risha was suprised Tyren wasn't moving. She thought he would strike her, but he didn't. She then realized how weak Tyren was. The rocks flew fast. They finaly met at one point. Crackling and rumbling as they hit. She opened her eyes ready to see Tyrens dead body.

Nahan was watching the battle from afar, he was supprised that Tyren didn't do anything to stop the boulders. He wouldv'e done something to stop it, but that would break the code of a duel. He stared in horror as the boulders met, and closed his eyes. He swore to kill Risha if Tyren died.

Rolik was amazed at the new girls power. He could even say he was scared. He never seen anyone make Tyren hesitate, let alone kill him. He smirked at the thought of Tyren dying helplessly. He watched waiting for the dust to clear.






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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 02, 2008 @ 09:26pm
OMG You had to leave it like that! OMG, what happens...ahhhh!? Lol! This is amazing!
Lol
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