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My original poems this is where i will try to put poems when i make them up feel free to comment them all you want


Dranelg
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crayon box by Glen

Your emotions are like crayons,
My life just a coloring book
And you color all that you can

occasionally ill stop and look
and see the pages that you took
from my multicolored book

you may take all that you can keep
or toss the rest and sweep

Black is when I sleep
Blue for when i weep
Jealousy is Green and mean

now its past evening
soon you'll be leaving
And may be receiving
some pages you colored for me


hope you people like it, I worked hard to write it.





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miranda awesome
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 06:38pm


yay! you should put the poem you wrote for meh on there too.


it bootiful.


CheaslyxEvilxGenius
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 06:56pm


wow!!! thats a really good poem. all of my poems sound horrible. you're good


Maybe some day I will find out who I really am.
And why I do what I do.
Till then I will just leave it all up to fate.
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Sako Hinode
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 07:10pm


Dang you're good! I suck at writing poetry! I dunno I guess it just takes talent to be able to right a good poem. I like this one it's good. biggrin


Peewee-Baseball
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Mon Feb 18, 2008 @ 02:30pm


wow thats good i love the emotion i remember things i wrote that did with color but not with a crayon box i would do markers or colored pencils bot crayon box pure genious!!!!!! A ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++


miranda awesome
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Sun Mar 02, 2008 @ 04:22pm


i like it. i think you should write one about that stupid rally that blake didnt call us for. (jk) not really.


-C00kiiez-
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Fri Mar 07, 2008 @ 04:06am


omg it was so great
it's like im friends with a poet
COOL blaugh


Dranelg
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Fri Mar 07, 2008 @ 04:07am


lol


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