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My original poems this is where i will try to put poems when i make them up feel free to comment them all you want


Dranelg
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Beat Beat by Glen

Beat beat
Beat beat
Beat beat

this sound i cant defeat
it wakes me in my sleep

Beat beat
Beat beat
Beat beat

sounds like a storm... but weak
yet still incomplete

Beat beat
Beat beat
Beat beat

when i see you i fill with so much heat

Beat beat beat beat beat beat

its hard to keep my heart from going

Beat beat
Beat beat
Beat beat

I try to take a seat

Beat beat beat beat beat beat

you'll find me when I'm not weak

Beat beat beat beat beat beat

is when our eyes they finally meet

yet my hear still goes

Beat beat
Beat beat
Beat beat


comment about what you think. biggrin





User Comments: [9]
CheaslyxEvilxGenius
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 06:57pm


you are really good you should put up some more


Sako Hinode
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 07:11pm


*looks above at Star's comment*
Yes you should! This one is good.


Peewee-Baseball
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 09:59pm


wow nice poetry i love the art of poetry to mostly funny poetry i dont usually rime


miranda awesome
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Sun Mar 02, 2008 @ 04:19pm


you changed it. how come you changed it? i liked it the way it was, when yous gave it to me.


Dranelg
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Sun Mar 02, 2008 @ 11:27pm


its called poetic license =P


Limei Pwns Joo
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Thu Mar 06, 2008 @ 08:26am


Nice. ninja


miranda awesome
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Thu Mar 27, 2008 @ 08:09pm


theres an error in the 25th line.


miranda awesome
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Tue Jun 24, 2008 @ 02:15am


helloo.


Adrizilla
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Mon Mar 23, 2015 @ 09:01pm


Hot 3nodding


User Comments: [9]
 
 
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