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MXM: CHAPTER 2.1: "SARAH"

I was on my way to dance practice when Suzzette stopped the car. I looked up from the book I was reading and said, "Suzzette, why'd u stop?"

"Look in front." she said.

"What the hell?"

There was a man in a black cloake standing in front of her car.

HONK, HONK! She honked the horn but the man didn't move. Then another man dressed the same way stood behind us.

"Oh crap", said Suzzette.

The man in front took off the cape but the one behind us didn't.

"Oh my God, he is so sexy" I said shocked at what I saw.

Suzzette kept honking the horn ignoring what I said.
The man had hair blonde,eyes blonde and skin pale. He was tall, very tall.
I couldn't clearly see the guy that was behind us but he seemed taller than the one in front.

Suzzette finally got out of the car and asked him to move. He just stood there and smiled.

Suddenly, Suzzette was turning away from the car and started to walk away toward the sidewalk. The street was empty, not a car or person, in sight.

"Where are u going", I asked.

She just kept walking and when she reached the sidewalk, she turned and faced me.

There was something different about her. Her eyes were all white and I could see a pupal in them. She just stood there, lifeless, not even breathing. Then before I could recogonive, the man in front was at my door, when I quickly locked it. He just gave a quick smile and yanked it open breaking the lock.

He stretched his hand out to grab me. I slapped away his hand buy before the contact from the slap was over, time was moving in slow motion and I saw him his face in pain.Then, I felt as if i had two, three different bodys and I was seeing through Suzzette's eyes as well as my own. I could hear every single thing around me as the color began to fade away.

It didn't feel natural but the contact was over after about a minute of that new life. After tht, all I saw was the man who was at my door, on the floor, having trouble breathing as he was gasping for air.

"Split!" He yelled the one in back in a deep voice as he in a split second appeared next to the blonde haired one.

The blonde was still having trouble breathing but then Suzzette ran and jumped in the car, closing the door behind herself.

"What was I doing over there?" she asked me, but I was focused on the two men until they suddenly disappeared.


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User Comments: [4]
x3_Gigglesz_x3
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Mon Mar 17, 2008 @ 12:57am


lol dance just like real life....lmao "omg he is sexy" lol....that was a kewl chapter i liked it...misterious and everything. KUDOS lol biggrin


Shikamaru(User of Shadows
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Wed Mar 26, 2008 @ 12:52am


Normally I would point and laugh at you but I am L and L doesnt laugh
biggrin not laughing
lol still not laughing

Oh nice signature mrgreen


Shikamaru(User of Shadows
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Wed Mar 26, 2008 @ 01:35am


You have everyone else under the sun but no Rashad gonk
Sorry I didnt read it yet because I got distracted by the titles sweatdrop


Shikamaru(User of Shadows
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Wed Mar 26, 2008 @ 01:51am


How isAllyssa alive while I could be dead crying

Its harder to make a story based on peaple you know smile


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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