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My Insane Ramblings.
i quit my other...i'm going back to bad poetry...
ah..um...yea...
ok...i've been writing a story with my friends...(3 diffrent one's acually... sweatdrop ) but the've all been fan fictions....i had one going....called 'Zane'...but it kinda died... i'm gonna try to start a story...and any one who comments can give me idea's....i may or may not be able to wriggle them in there...but i'll try my best...i don't know what i'd start...but i've been in a vampire/alternate future mood ever since i read 'Sunshine' my Robin Mckinley...

btw, Thank you Winery for checking on my journal! heart now i know that SOMEONE might possible peek in here and give me some tips!!!!
any way...i'll give it a shot....


wahmbulance `~`Susan sighed and stared into the pine boughs above her head. She'd had a rotten day. Firstsome idiot trys to run her over on her way to work. secondly, another Bonehead got angry and tryied to come over the counter at the deli. (she works at a Super Market, her boss condemed her to taking orders at the bread section) and then her boss decided to take the damages out of her paycheck...

The swing swung slightly...a faint creak issuing from the rusted chain was not helping her headach any.`~` wahmbulance




ok...any ideas as to where i should go with this drabble?






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 06, 2008 @ 12:39am
I'm glad you're starting a story, though. ^_^ Nice start, too. I like how you start with her having problems right off. I don't have any suggestions right now, but let me know when you continue. XD


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