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My Insane Ramblings.
i quit my other...i'm going back to bad poetry...
Susan story continues?
well...since no one said anything aout the story i'm gonna write more on my own...

wahmbulance Susan heaved herself upright and stumbled into the house....she never knew why she had planted a PINE tree in her back yard when she moved in...mabey it was because where she came from there were TONS of pine tree's

her leg was sore from standing behind a counter all day. any way it was getting dark out side and she needed to go and get some sleep. as she passed her living room she heard the TV...odd she didn't leave it on did she?
She was going to turn it on but something the newslaty said caught her attention.
" Breaking news on the Strange illness that has Infected Dozzens of people in the nation"
Susan frowned 'Strange Illness? what crap was the media spouting now?
" Reports say that they have STOPED produsing there own blood are breathing strange."
at this point the Woman put a hand up to her ear.
" It also seems that the Victems heart acually stops beating for hours at a time...what?"

this last bit wat directed at someone off screen. she frowned and started whispering.
" Thats Insane!"
she shruged and turned back to the camra.
" WE'll keepe you posted, anyway you can get all our facts on our website . And here's John with the sports!"

At this point susan turned it off and wen't to bed. The story was probly some media hox for money. Next thing you know the'll be asking for donations. wahmbulance


ok, thats all for now folks...






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 06, 2008 @ 12:46am
This was interesting. I want to know more about the illness and I liked the way you introduced it here. I also like Susan's reaction, lol. ^_^ And don't be afraid to just keep writing, your ideas are great. I really have no suggestions, just keep going! and let me know when you add more XD


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