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Milenchu continued. WAHOO!
back to the story....

Us: AHHHHHHHHHHH!

(we land with a hard BOOM)

Eric: What the heck was that?

Brandon: Olman were are you?!

Oldman: Youve arrived intact, good. So you are members of the Milenchu force otherwise the vortex wouldve killed you.

US: WHAAAAAAAT!?

Brandon: (grabs the old man up by the collar) Listen Oldman enough with the bull, why dont you prove to me that I have this power!

Oldman: Youd be wise to put me down boy.

Brandon: OR WHAT?!

(The Old man lets out a field of energy that knocks Brandon through a wall)

Eric: BRANDON! Hey, whyd you do that?

Tyrell: Eric calm down or he'll do that to you too. Now Oldman, tell us what it is we need to know about ourselves, if you will.

Oldman: Why tell you when I can show you,... Tyrell step forward.

Tyrell: Me?

Oldman: Yes, come here.

(Tyrell looks at Eric)

Eric: I trust him, go on.

(Tyrell steps up and the Oldman stretches out his hand)

Oldman: I shall unlock your hidden powers. HAAAAAAAAAA!

(Tyrells head tilts back)

Tyrell: Uhhggg!

Oldman: How do you feel now?

Tyrell: I...I...(collapses to the ground)

Eric: TYRELL!

Tyrell: .......I feel INCREDIBLE!

(Tyrell begins to float on air)

John: Alright Im a believer, me next.

Oldman: Step forward and we shall proceed.

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{Appears} Geeze that nap was too long. I loved your answers to my type question maybe I should ask more. Oh yea IM GONNA FINISH THE FANFIC! So without further adue...

MILENCHU (continued)

John: Im ready!

Oldman: Alright here we go (the oldman releases an energy on Johns forehead) Alright how do you feel?

John: Li...like my heart just froze and brooke into pieces.(shivers)

Oldman: Good, Brandon youre next, are you ready?

If J-whore can do it than it'll be no problem for me. Lets do it.

Oldman: Ok, prepare yourself Akayo...

Brandon: What did you call m,... AHHHHHH! my insides... are on... FIRE!

Oldman: Now its your turn Rin, are you ready?

Eric: I guess so, but my name is... AHHHHHHHHHH!!!! (Eric began shaking violently)

Eric: Are you kidding me. I feel great! Yo know what im sayin Brandon?!! (Erics eyes fill with purple light)

Brandon: Yeah, he wasnt lieing I feel stronger than ever!

John: (shivers) Why am I soo cold?It feels like my temperature is below zero.

Oldman: thats because it is John, your elemental power is ice , and Akayo, yours is fire...

Brandon: Thats no surprize, I've got the best one, of course.

Eric: So I guess this tingly feeling I have is electricity surging through my body.

Oldman: That is correct Rin.

Tyrell: So what do I have?

Oldman: Youve got a speciel one Shintoga, you can manipulate time.

Shintoga sad smirks) I see.

Eric: Watch out world cause here we come!

(They all do a special pose... that looks really corny)

Olman: Hold on you all. I didnt unlock your powers for naught. Listen as I tell you of the one they call Morph.

John: who's M...

Brandon: Shutup and let him finish! Go on Oldman.

(to be continued)
Is the story starting to pick up, Is it boring you what? Let me know, As you already know, I LOVE hearing your input. All good writers can take constructive critisism so be honest. P.S. My quetion for today is, What video game character would you be if you could choose any and which game character do I remind you of? *blows kiss* {VANISHES}

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Ahhh this is a great pic of Feng kickin Jins a**! XD jk Tyrell Haahaahaaaaa!
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  • User Comments: [3]
    Manami Mimi
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    Sun Aug 28, 2005 @ 05:42am


    that story was coolie rin ^^ *hugs* ttyl


    O-Nette
    Community Member





    Sun Aug 28, 2005 @ 09:18pm


    The story is getting good! I'm mad at the corny action pose....
    And we were treated with pics!!! I'm honored. Write more!!


    ~BrideoftheNosferatu~
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    Sun Aug 28, 2005 @ 11:32pm


    Pimpness!! Keep writing, the story is sexy........


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