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Milenchu (continued)

Anger: Maybe I will get my wish after all. Hmm, why does Master Morph want him soo badly anyway? Whatever, Come on Torment lets go.

(Anger and Torment dissapear with brandon)

(At the general hospital)

(Eric and his grandmother appear in the Emergency Room out of nowhere)

Eric: How did we get here?

Nurse: What in the...

Eric well I'll figure that out later, for now I need to find help for my grandmother.

Grandma: E...Eri...I...

Eric: Save your breath Grama. Nurse we need help NOW!

Nurse: Umm... Ok but...

Eric: No buts! She needs medical attention RIGHT NOW!!!

Nurse: Alright, put her in this wheelchair, I'll page the doctor right away.

Eric: Thank you very much... OH NO! Brandon is still there, facing them alone! Gramma your in safe hands now, I'll be back ok?

Gramma: Be carefull...... Rin

(Grammas head drops)

Eric: She's calling me that too...

(Eric arrives back at the factory)

Eric: Theres no one here, whats going on?.... OH GOD!

(Eric spots a small pool of blood)

Eric: Blood? No, this is all my fault!

Oldman: This is not your fault Rin.

Eric: Wheres Brandon!

Oldman: I'm guessing Morph has him. But why would he keep him alive... unless. Rin, Shintoga and John know what happened and are awaiting our return at the base. Lets leave.

(The Oldman stretches out his hand and a portal appears, they step through)

Eric: Oldman, how did I...

Oldman: Teleport? Its one of the many techniques that were unlocked in you, pretty soon you'll realize your potential.

(They arrive at the base)

John: You alright?

Eric: I''l be alright when I find who has my bro and make them pay!

Tyrell: Well we'll be coming with you on this one Eric.

John: Yea I'm ready to kick some...

Oldman: You'll only die if you rush into this. Plus you dont fully understand your powers yet. I suggest you stay here and train awhile first. Morph kept Akayo alive for a reason so you dont have to worry about him being killed, so for the time being, focus on your training.

Tyrell: That makes sense I guess, what do you think Eric?

Eric: Sounds like a plan, and oh, call me Rin.

Oldman: He's finally beginning to accept his destiny, this brings me great joy.

John: Well what are we waiting for, lets begin.

(training commences)

(Morphs base around the same time)

Brandon: (Awakens) where am I? What am I connected to? (srtuggles)

Telepathic voice: No need to struggle younge one, Im not going to harm you.

Brandon: Then what do you want?

Telepathic voice: I'm just going to open your eyes to the truth.

(A needle gets gets injected into Brandons neck)

Brandon: AHHHHHHHHHHHH! What... was... that.....

(Brandon loses consciousness)

(Voices echo in his head)

(Let me in)

(Do you feel your power rising)

(He left you for dead)

(He only sees you as compitition, not a friend)

(Let me help you, mold you into the demon you were born to be)

Telepathic voice: Akayo Kanachi! Awaken..... my son.

(Akayo lifts up his head and his eyes seem filled with pure fire)

Brandon: Yes... father.

(Back at the Milenchu base)

Oldman: Good John, your ice blast technique is comming along nicely, keep at it.

John: Thanks, Ive been working on it all day, and thanks to Shintogas powers , this has been the longest day ever.

Tyrell: I cant help it, I'm traing too you know.

Eric: Oldman, have we learned anywhere near enough to stand a chance against Morph and his goons?

Oldman: You all are learning pretty quick but.....

John: YOU GUYS, GET OVER HERE!!

(they all crowd the TV)

Tv Broadcaster: The annual tournament of the fighters is comming up folks. This year it'll be held at the downtown Convention center. We welcome all fighters, whether you be a martial artist, wrestler, boxer, whatever you are, if you think you have what it takes to be crowned "Northern Reigeons Best Fighter", then get down here and register! Besides bragging rights, First place gets this golden trophie and 10,000,000 dolla....

(the microphone is snatches from the announcer)

Akayo: RIN SYNOSKE, GET YOUR a** DOWN HERE NOW! Youd better enter this tournament so I can have the pleasure of ending your life on the battle field. YOU'LL PAY FOR LEAVING ME THERE THAT NIGHT!

(Akayo drops the mic and dissapears)

Rin: Is he serious?!

TV Broadcaster: Well you heard it here folks, we've already got two contestants in this years tournament. How exciting! For all you others who wanna enter, you have one month before..

(Rin turns off the tv)

Eric: Oldman, is this some kinda trick that does even sound like him. Morph did something and I'm gonna find out what. Brando, I mean Akayo cant be serious.

John: He sounded pretty serious to me.

Tyrell: This tournament will be the opportunity we needed to test our new abilities. I cant wait.

Eric: Morph must have Akayo under some sort of mind control or something. Whatever it is I'll save my friend. We're entering that tournament!

(one week later)

John: Wow its finally starting to feel normal being this cold all the time, plus its worth it if I get to learn all these cool moves.

(John fires his Ice blast at the traing dummy)

Rin: Thats cool John, but check this one out.... Thundeeeer... CANNON!

(Rin holds both his arms out to each side and a large ball of lightning shoots across the room at light speed)

Rin: How do ya like that?

Shintoga: We have three more weeks left to perfect these techniques.

Rin: Thats a good amount of time to practice makin my moves look more flashy. I wanna give the girls that are watching a show.

Shintoga: Is that all you ever think about?

Rin: Of course not Shin, I also think about food, and speakin of it, OLDMAN!

(the oldman apears)

Rin: Wheres the food in this place, Im starving!

(Shintoga shakes his head)

Oldman: Yes of course, down the hallway and to your left, help yourself.

Rin: Alright, now we're talkin!

Shintoga: Hey John, you wanna spar a little to see how we've progressed so far?

John: Sure why not? lets go.

(Tyrell and John begin sparring)

(5 min later)

Rin: Wow, that was delicious! Thanks oldman.

(Oldman goes into the kitchen)

Oldman: THERES NOTHING LEFT! YOU ATE IT ALL!

Rin: Oops sorry. I guess I went a little overboard when I heard you say help yourself.

Oldman: A LITTLE!?! Well I cant do anything about it now. I'll just have to restock.

John: Hey Eri., I mean Rin, you might wanna see this!

(Rin runs to the tv)

News reporter: We are live downtown where you are all witnissing a teenage boy, from what I can make out, destroying buildings with his bare hands!

Akayo: AHHHHHHHHHHHH! RIIIIIIIIIIN! The tournement is too far away for me to wait! I WANNA KILL YOU NOW! AHHHHHHHHHHH! (Akayo becomes engulfed in flames) My SOUL BURNS WITH HATE!

Tyrell: Im pretty sure the three of us can stop hi...

Rin: NO WAY. This is between us. I said I'd get to the bottom of this and thats what im gonna do...

(Rin begins glowing with a blue light and electricity circling around his body)

(Rin then bursts out the window at the speed of light)

John: What the, that was fast.

Shintoga sad Gets ready to follow him)

Oldman: WAIT! Let it happen like this.

Shintoga: (nodes)

(Rin arrives downtown)

Rin: AKAYO! WHERE ARE YOU? IM HERE SO LETS SETTLE THIS!.... (looks out of the corner of his eye) Oh, there you are.

Akayo: (eyes catch on fire) YOU... DIE.... NOOOOOOOOOOW!

(Akayo flies towards Rin in a blaze of fire)

Rin: THATS HOW YOU WANNA DO THIS?! OK THEN.... THUUUNDEEEEEERRRR....

(to be continued)

OMG Rin and Akayo about to fight! Who can win this one? I dont know. Question of the day, Who would you like to see win this fight Akayo Kanachi or Rin Synoske? {VANISHES}

(to be continued)

Phew, done for today.<img src="http://www.roomwithamoose.com/pictures/pilot_15.jpg">
Umm Question of the day: WHOS YOUR MFAVORITE MILENCHU CHARACTER SO FAR?! be honest, and dont say me just because I wrote it XD. (But if im am your fav i wont mind '^o^)


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  • User Comments: [1]
    O-Nette
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    Thu Sep 01, 2005 @ 09:09pm


    Question 1: I wanna see Akayo win! Then that'll make Rin start to doubt himself and Morph will become stronger. twisted

    Question 2: Rin and Akayo are my favs so far. Akayo is brainwashy sexy evil. Rin is....goofy and has a tapeworm.

    question Why doesn't John have a cool secret identity??? question


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