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Raven's Crossroads
Ok so this is my story that I am attempting to write><;; I also am making a list of my characters. I would love it if people would read and comment on this. it would really help me^^
First attempt at Raven's Crossroad.
~There is a character profile also so you can look at that before i will updte when I introduce new characters~^^

The day was dreary and damp. As the old prophet trudged through the corpses left in the wake of Morzon.She scowled to herself for not being able to control his murderous hunger."That master of mine..." she started, but was thrown into a vison.
The daylight was being closed out by huge wings. Ravens wings. Two girls stood faceing each other. One Haveing huge curving demonic horns surrounded by red and black hair orange eyes glowing brightly in the darkness. the other female was smiling.Her perfectly white teeth gleaming.While her white hair thrashed madly in the wind. Her cold gray eyes never wavered from the red head's eyes. When suddenly in a flash the two of them started to fight.
The white haired girl yelling out, "Leyli you will never beat me. Your too good hearted, despite your look." she sneered at her wanting her to lose her temper.
Leyli replied by saying calmly "Kasai it is you who will never beat me. Your evil ways are going to end here and Morzon will die by my hand."
Kasai laughed pulling out a huge sword from her onyx raven shaped necklace. "Our father will not die by your hand, but by mine. Thus putting me as the full ruler of Delacroix and Arcadia."
Leyli's only reply was to summon a scythe from the same exact necklace around her neck. The two stood in a ready stance.Quickly they ran at each other there weapons connecting with a spark.They stood face to face there weapons locked onto each other.
The vision slowly faded away. The scene replaying in the old prophets mind forever. She shook her head confused at what she had just seen. All she knew was that Morzon would have two girls who wanted to kill him. One to rule the other for unknown reasons. As the prophet began to trudge back to her master's castle she knew what she was going to tell the ruler of all vampires when she returned.
Upon reaching her master's castle she dramatically threw open the twenty foot high wooden doors proclaiming " I have had a vision!" Immediatly servants flew to her side excidely probing the old women for a hint of the vision. The old women shook her head and brushed off the eager servants saying,"Where is the master this is concerning his attention."
One servant spoke up replying, "I have sent for him already. He will be arriving shortly." At the moment he finished his sentences heavy footsteps could be heard walking down a side hallway. As if pulled back all the servants were immediatly at the wall there hands behind there backs. Staring straight ahead all playfulness gone.
A man ,or so he appeared,thundered into the entranceway. His neck length blood red hair flying behind him in a ponytail. His emotionless red eyes staring at the old woman. He wore thick black army boots, pushing his already 6'6 hieght up another three inches. A long black ragged cape lay off of his shoulders. A tight black shirt pulled over his rock hard chest, covering the top of his baggy black pants. He spoke in a rough voice "What is it you have seen old women that is so important to bring me hear?" he demanded towering over the little old women.
The prophet took a deep breath before beginning. " I have seen that you will have two daughters who will be born on the same the day as each other. Both will try to kill you. One for your power of ruleing the other for reasons I know not. They will each have immense power and weapons. One with the death scythe, the other with the holy sword. That is all that I have seen my lord." she finished glancing back up to her master's clouded eyes.
He said not one word to the prophet as he quickly turned around and stalked back to his room thinking to himself 'One of my children will have the weapon I could not control how can that be? I am the greatest vampire lord ever to be seen! To be had! How can this be? I will just have to make sure she never ventures from this palace thus she will never find whatever power she will have to be able to weild the Death Scythe!' He sat down on his chair picking up a cup of blood for nurishment when there was a knock on his door."Come in." he said gruffily.
In walked to women one a full breed princess elf,Eelena. The other a demon from the Winterlands,Circe. He smiled at the two biggest prizes in his life. One was givin as a gift the other was stolen from the elfen kingdom. Both women looked at each other then back at Morzon. "Sir..." they both began "We seem to be pregant."
Morzon looked at them and sighed, "Why is this important to me?" he asked the two of them thinking 'This will two more added to the other five who are pregnant with my children.'
The women looked at each other again, "Sir.." began Eelena "It seems that our children will be born on the same day as each other!" She finished breathlessly.
Morzon stared at the two women in shock.The fated children he had heard about not two minutes earlier were already on there way. He slowly began to smile a cold, and evil smile that was burned into the womens minds forever.






User Comments: [2]
Sir Sky Suicide
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Fri Aug 15, 2008 @ 07:27am


omfg! i love it. so much desription, and great story line! cant wait to read the rest! mrgreen


XxMad_Hatter_RosexX
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Mon Aug 18, 2008 @ 07:11pm


I love the first chapter or attempt....is that the name of the chapter or what? domokun


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