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Redd Death's Daily Thoughts Dump Bucket!!!
This is were i dump me ramdom thoughts. They always fall out in weird words and then i giggle a little.
Part two of my Emo Poem...
Emo Poem Part 2...

I sink to the bottom of the abyss.
My lungs almost filled, I waited.
Quietly, impatiently.
I waited for the darkness to have me.
To swallow me.
To take me away were problems couldn't fallow.
Suddenly, a force drove me upward.
A current I suppose.
I let it push and pull me until it spit me on a little island.
Forcing the water out of my lungs, I groped the rich black sand.
I stared at the light, bobbing at the surface, as it moved towards me.
The light, it was a boy.
I could do nothing as he harshly, struck me
across my chest.
Trying to rip my heart out I suppose.
A sudden flash of light took me away for everything.
The beach disappeared beneath me.
The wind rushed by me. Very pleasant.
I was slipping and I loved it.
No more trouble, no more conflict, Only darkness.
I smiled at my demise as I slowly drifted away...


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  • User Comments: [1]
    saint aero
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    Sun Nov 23, 2008 @ 07:31pm


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    I love how it's a narrative and a poem at the same time. Also, the fact that it's not elegant or wordy, and yet, not childish, makes me admire your work.

    It's sad, though.... :'(


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