Yeah, forget all that. Like the writing, but I'm going in a different direction with the main character, and the prologue.
Though, I like Mr. Formerly-Likho's style. I'll definitely keep his blunt characterization and jaded edge. Only problem is, what should I name him? I'm thinking of an American, possibly of Hispanic or Middle-Eastern ancestry. Young guy, characterized mainly by his realistic outlook and bottom-line-first tactics. Contractor.
I've got nuttin'.
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