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This will hold my stories and drawings, and my artisic things
Chapter One: Decisions
The morning was hard. It must be really hard to sleep with Orochimaru screaming at everyone and Kagura complaining. Shippuuden just couldn't stand the noise. She slowly got out of her hard rock bed, and slipped on her jacket. "This is getting too annoying.." she said, as she walked out of her room. She yawned as she passed the gray walls and soaked through floors. She reached the living room, to see her family, Orochimaru, Kagura, Fate, and Bando, bickering at eachother, like normal. The snake man looked over his shoulder at his adopted blonde daughter.
"Ah morning sweetie? Did we wake you?" he asked. Shippuuden rolled her light blue eyes, and folded her arms.
"What do you think?" she asked, walking away from the snake, and passing the rich girl and Anbu woman. "You guys always do this. I neevr get any sleep, I neevr get any respect. What am I? 15! 'm 15 yars old, and you still never let me near the village or anything." Orochimaru sighed and grabbed her shoulders.
"Now sweetie, we know you can't do that." he said, "I'll be very bad." She sighed again, and pushed the raven head away.
"I don't care, I'm sick of you guys. I want something new to happen." Shippuuden said, walking outside. "I'm gonna walk outside the house for a little, since I can't go ANYWHERE else!" The blonde slammed the door behind her and the rest of teh family stood silent.

Leaves were falling silently and blowing in the gentle breeze. Shippuuden walked through the forest, feeling down that she was never a normal person. She was a ninja, more like a human weapon she called it. Her father adopted her at two, or so people say that, and trained her for years and years on end. He whipped her, he abused her, he starved her, anything to get her stronger. It wasn't an easy life. Shippuuden looked up at the sky, seeing the clouds made her relax a little, but not much. She sighed and sat down below a tree, watching the leaves dance around her. She watched them dance and dance and sighed. "I wish I was just like that. Able to move free in the wind, and keep me out of this prison I call home..." she thought to herself. Her thought process was interrupted when the wind howling got worse and the bushes around her rustled. She jumped to her feet immetdatly, and readied herself for a fight. "This'll be good." she thought to herself.

To be Continued...






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Muffled Moans
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 23, 2009 @ 08:26pm
Thats REALLY good but theres some spelling errors.

Good Job

(:


commentCommented on: Tue Jun 23, 2009 @ 09:54pm
Really good. You might want to go back and edit the second paragraph. You have some typos.



Nika the Loveless
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Sharolee
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 23, 2009 @ 10:03pm
Love itttttttttttttttt!
*Thinking about writing a story with OC's in it.*


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 01, 2009 @ 09:01pm
and so it begins ^^ nice start my Shippy arrow



Ouka Skysoul
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